Photographer’s Note
She looked back and smiled at me.
That was enough reason to decide that I want to upload this photo.
Taken on my lunch break again.
Well, working alone during most of my work time is really good. I can decide when to take rest and when to start working again. I took 2 hours of lunch break on that day because the weather was nice and I had my Oly in my passengers' seat. And that is why I needed to work until late evening the following day.
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shal
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(934) 2006-04-20 9:01
Hey Lauryn,
lovely postcard like shot :)
great work,
Cheers TFS,
Vishal Sabharwal
gebala
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(0) 2006-04-20 9:15
hello, beauty compo, so teneder and so nice, I like this path with these trees:) beauty photo:)
rgs
nwoehnl
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(120) 2006-04-20 9:36
A nice and charming moment, Lauryn. Very nice to have the lady smile at you from underneath her hat in the idyllic-looking sakura setting. It's a bit soft in focus but still pleasant to look at. The fences on either side give a good "corridor" effect towards the back.
SUKIYAKI
(0) 2006-04-20 10:02
構図は素晴らしいと思えるのですが、毎度の如くピントが謎なのですよ。
あと、色彩のメリハリも、オリンパスのレンズらしからぬです。
ｶﾞｧ
右手の袋が庶民っぽくてイイ感じです。
:)
Modacolor51
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(1309) 2006-04-20 10:12
Beautiful place. Good composition and frame. Good colours and light. Well done.
Yılmaz..
roamermark
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(1588) 2006-04-20 10:51
Hi,
I like the leading lines and the soft focus. That and your smiling subject give a lovely tranquil effect to the shot.
Mark
tcht
(7298) 2006-04-20 15:03
Hi Lauryn,
This is really good combination of street & landscape photography. Strong perspective, lovely colours and great framing. Perhaps bit too soft & not saturated enough but apart from that I don't see any problems.
Cheukhin
PeterC
(2242) 2006-04-20 21:37
Lauryn,
Really nice composition i love the path and the trees very strong lines. I wish the image was a bit brighter so i have jut done a little workshop. So you can see that smile a little more. I hope you dont mind. Doh my limit has been reached WS tomorrow
Cheers
Peter
PixelTerror
(87159) 2006-04-22 13:08
Hi Lauryn,
A shot at the decisive moment, it seems she was feeling your presence and you clicked just as she was turning back for checking out what's going on, besides that a good perspective with strong leading lines and I agree with others, a bit soft.
Have a nice week end,
Jean-Yves
Kenny10pin
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(19301) 2006-04-24 3:31
interesting image, I like the person looking your way and smiling, still a little sharper would be great
batalay
(21408) 2007-02-01 15:53
Hello Luryn,
What a wonderful example of one-point perspective, with all the "parallel lines" converging on the horizon. I see you took tis image last April when the winter was almost over and nature was assuming a new mantle of folliage. That is a nice thought for this year, but three months more of bleak winte weather.
I enjoyed reading your characterization of the ten words that described you (in your intro). Warm regards,
Bulent
Photo Information
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Copyright: lauryn chie (zig)
(2450)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-04-18
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Olympus E 300, Zuiko 14-45mm digital
- Exposure: f/7.1, 1/500 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Hanami 2006 [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-04-20 8:56
