I went to the place used for waiting. Two women were standing there. One person was waiting for the sweetheart (?) and waiting and one more person were waiting for money. The left-hand side woman has a monk's practicing asceticism dress on. However, she is imitation. Though regrettable, most priests who are present in a city are the men of monetary value reliance. I am sad :-(
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maciekda (19895) 2003-12-12 4:34
the scene is interesting and well composed, but main subjects are a bit too small, lost in the picture, you must look for them for a while, if not your title maybe I would't notice them even... but I like the scene and your careful composition. I think you could have two interesting pictures with those women too if you came a bit closer to them, the background is really interesting.
jrj (34843) 2003-12-12 6:28
Interesting picture and comments. The photo is for me well composed with the special effect you gets from the floor and the roof - creating a kind of box.
joso (2417) 2003-12-12 8:45
A very interesting, very good composed and balanced photo.
The background with its living colours, framed by the cold, neonlighted surrounding. The round form in the foreground contrasting to the upper lines, broken by the two neons.
Mireille (2604) 2003-12-12 14:13
Try to make this world different ! I know that's a really hard work but with pictures like yours, it is a first step to give to people some hope...
Ebbe (9617) 2003-12-12 16:33
A very interesting picture. We have some small handicraft works here that are like a small room in a box with a window on one side and you put it up on the wall like a painting. Your picture is something like that with the box feeling. And the contrast between the two women, they seem so different. The big backlighted landscape really adds some dramatic effect, the scale in the picture is so different from the scale of the room. Well seen Souya!
flip89 (3410) 2003-12-12 16:59
Fantastic. A very amusing tableau you've got here, Souya ... it's like a play on stage, a performance art, or a diorama even. Well seen, well composed and well commented.
kourosh (2375) 2003-12-12 22:12
well seen souya. your symmetric composition works for me. nice work!
orme (7215) 2003-12-13 22:18
Very interesting composition and note. But what I really like are the patterns and lighting on the ceiling and floor - and the fact that they remind me of the transporter room in Star Trek. Well framed.
- Copyright: Souya Sekiguchi (souyas) (385)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-12-10
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Minolta Dimage A1, 28mm-200mm F2.8-F3.5, JPEG ISO 100
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/15 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2003-12-12 3:58
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