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Photo Information
Copyright: Cristian Tomescu (tomescuc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 0 N: 77] (1211)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02
Categories: Daily Life, Festivals, Food
Camera: Nikon D200, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3,5-4,5G ED, 67mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-02 8:01
Viewed: 985
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Food vendor at a street festival in Osaka.
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  • xavis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 343 W: 84 N: 571] (2794)
  • [2008-05-02 8:05]
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Hola!
the composition, the cropt, lights, colours and the action are great...great,...just a little probleme (usual when we took pictures quickly on the street), the focus is on the background. It doesn't bore me a lot, but may be I would try to blured a little the background, specialy the woman to give the feeling that all the picture is slighty out of focus.

Best regards,

Javier

Hello Cristian. A photo from the world of the work. The composition is outstanding, the close frameworks ideal. The photo works very directly and authentically. The technical quality (sharpness) could be somewhat better however. Altogether the photo pleases me very well. Best regards, Wolfgang.

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  • plimrn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3755 W: 232 N: 5049] (15959)
  • [2008-05-02 14:52]
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Hi Cristian,
I like photos of people at work; I especially like the way you captured the man's look of intense concentration

I read your profile note and see you live in California. We're having a TE meeting at Point Reyes June 14-15. We'll be stayinbg at the Olema Resort Comground in spce 145 in the Dogwood section. We will arrive on Friday the 13th. Others coming include Peter Boehringer, Steve Warnstaff & John & Joanne Munro. Several others are maybes. In addition to photo expeditions, we'll share processing tips at the Campground conference room. You're welcome to join us.
HLJ, Pat

Maybe a slight diguising local OOF blur darkening sat- on top corner right to hide the lady with a cigarette ? between her fingers :) as the high POV compo and colortones are really nice here like he was partly hidden by a curtain of smoke. An apealing shot Cristian, worth to work out.
Henk

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  • bisok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 73 N: 97] (583)
  • [2008-05-03 17:50]

Hi Cristian.
Very interesting photo here. An action and a smell... A Great moment. Nice mixture of colours. The photo works very directly and authentically indeed. I like this photo. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Best regards.
Mirek

Great sober, natural colours and very interesting subject - I like to watch his expression full of seriousness and concentration !
Compliments,
Cath.

Hi Cristian.

Excellent moment! How you caught that vendor working is great!

Rgs, Oscar

cred ca e minunat si in acelasi timp foarte interesant sa ai ocazia sa fotografiezi momentele unui festival de/pe strada intr-o zona asa colorata si bogata vizual

imi place scena si imi starneste curiozitati :) - deci scopul e atins :) ... (... oare ce gust are?)

dora

Very nice capture Cristian, perfect composition and strong image. Excellent!

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