going to pray Photo

Photographer’s Note

Nara - Japan
I was looking at the temple when a man crossed the street with his bicycle, focused on his trip, he never saw either of us. I imagined he was going to pray at the temple surrounded by beautiful nature.

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CLODO (4068) 2009-04-10 4:29

Hi Carlotta
The sky line is not horizontal in your shot, and there is no evident link between the temple and the man riding his bike. Your shot is vertically symetrical, so the eye is not focused on a spot. For example, the bike SHOULD have been on the right to have sufficient space in front on it, and would have destroy the symetry.
Welcome and TE and continue to post to get comments and to improve your vision
regards
CLODO