Photographer’s Note
When cycling on Sunday, I found this little girl with her daddy enjoying the cycling by the sea.
Tech: non cropped. level adjusted, unsharp mask(320%, 0.2, 0), added frame, and NeatImage(Noise Reduction Amounts H:50% M:25% L:10%) for downsizing.
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bantonbuju
(48844) 2005-10-23 3:55
hi hisashi, absolutely an amazing capture - i love that cycling couple being captured right in the moment when they were passing by a huge mosaic-wheel on the floor, great colors and i love the distortion effect of your lovely 10-22 mm lens;
superb image;
best wishes, jerzy
rhizomes
(15325) 2005-10-23 3:56
Hi Hisashi,
Great shot ! The point of view is interesting with these "mosaic" on the ground and the two cyclist in front of the sea !
The light and the colors are fantastics !
Christophe
sarhanp
(122) 2005-10-23 3:57
I think this picture is mark of peace. Nice and soft colors on the graphic floorstones. Father and daughter(may not but I want to assume) changing this static panaroma into a peaceful and living picture.
TFS,
Sarhan.
DLM
(6447) 2005-10-23 4:12
Hi Hisashi,nice image with good detail and adding the people really makes the shot.
Well done.
Dave.
frozenjazz
(303) 2005-10-23 4:28
Excellent use of this wonderful 10-22 that I also enjoy very much.
I appreciate the overall relaxing atmosphere, which is spiced up by the windsurfers who bring a more dynamic touch.
As I always try to find negative points (I am tired with boring "excellent image, good composition" critiques), the minor things I see are:
- I would correct (distort) the image so that the front lines are totally parallel to the frame.
- Also I regret that the sky is too dark on the left. (polarizer strong effect ?)
- And to finish, the photo would have been perfect if the bikes were more on the right of the image. :)
But your image is really good, and the nice cloud in the sky is very welcome.
Technically, I am wondering why you did not use a smaller aperture to get more depth of field, but it does not show on this 800x600 small image anyway...
Enjoy your wide angle !
partha
(13677) 2005-10-23 4:58
This is a very well taken pic. But i think giving more space towards the direction of the cyclists may improve the overall pic.
See workshop.
nickthegreek82
(1578) 2005-10-23 5:24
Impresive shot.
A very well chosen subject and a very nice composition.
Very nice shot!~
Luan
(15935) 2005-10-23 5:59
Hello Hisashi,
excellent picture, the sky is gret en the ground is so graphic.
Very nice catch
Luan
gringofil
(0) 2005-10-23 8:30
What a magical moment. Everything is perfect here, I think, right from the super-wide angle to the bicycles and the patterns on the floor. A wonderfully simple shot that works very well. Good work!
gaby
(19793) 2005-10-24 11:18
Hi Hisashi splendid capture with wonderful compo, light and tones - I love this shot and the landscape around the cycling couple -
Thanks
Rgs
Gaby
zig
(2450) 2005-10-25 19:12
むっちゃいいですね!こういう写真、大好きです。とても良い瞬間を素敵なバックグラウンドとともに、切り取れて、すばらしいです。ひさしさんのショットは、透明感がありますね。さすがっ!
kclai
(2267) 2005-11-23 3:44
Hi Hisashi
That's a cool daddy/daughter candid shot. The flooring are very interesting and the small patches of cloud appearing from the right is good.
I noticed that you are using ISO 400 for such afternoon shot. Why? And the value of aperture at f/5.6!! This value will give tremendous noise with the use of ISO 400, together.
Yeah, the polarizer work good here.
Cool work, Hisashi.
Eric Lai
bullabulla
(3488) 2005-11-30 6:41
hello Hisashi!
nice picture I like the effect f the large lens
the colors are well polarizered
well done
Laetitia
bnallama
(3755) 2005-12-14 13:12
Hi Hisashi.. just discovering your galery... I agree with fil's coment here.. simple but effective shot... very graphical and great PoV.. Bala
jiherka
(4465) 2005-12-15 16:10
Really a good composition. I like the constast of the big and small bicycle, the fact taht the ground seems to continue ont he barrier.
Well done Hisashi-san.
Salutations
Jacques
Saule
(289) 2006-01-09 20:56
I like the visual effect of contrasting circles to squares. That and the little piece of cloud in the sky give a kind of futuristic effect to this picture. Beautiful composition!
Saule.
sebcz
(2345) 2006-09-25 9:17
Great texture of the floor, plus the happy mood, clear blue sky with just one balancing the right side cloud...
I like it!
Regards,
Seb
nisko
(2461) 2007-04-19 12:09
hello hisashi!
Wonderful point of view light and colours!!the cloud is the deep blue,clear sky is also so impressive!really nice composition..tfs
best regards
edytungkal
(4521) 2007-08-21 20:15
What a lovely scene with father and daughter on the bicycles. The colours so wonderful despite the sun was against you. i see two small sailing boats on the distance, i thought it would be a nice subject to capture. A pleasant view, Hisashi. tfs
daniel
sebinho342
(18804) 2007-09-16 9:52
Hi Hisashi, a pleasure to have the opportunity to visit your gallery, i guess i did it very few times (perhaps 0 !) and it's really a great one, good eyes and great technicity.
I stop on that one which is very great, perfect use of the wide angle, i would have perhaps suggest you included all the circle in foreground on the left.
Excellent, classy, smooth and cool, i love the spirit here
doubay
(5051) 2008-02-11 7:22
Hi Hisashi!
I can feel the sun burning on my skin when I look at it.
Aesthetic and humorous shot, ver good use of the wide angle. Well seen and captured.
Cheers
Andreas
vinicio
(22498) 2008-05-21 23:14
Other than the beautiful place, much colored and artistic I much like your use of the lens distortion, the result is very nice and pleasant, compliments Hisashi, also to your beautiful collection of images.
Have a nice day
Ciao
Vinicio
Photo Information
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Copyright: Hisashi Yuya (hispic)
(7399) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-10-02
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS Kiss Digital(300D), EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5 USM, RAW @ ISO 400, Polarizer
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1600 seconds
- Map: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2005-10-23 3:37
Discussions
- To kclai: Why ISO 400 ? (2)
by hispic, last updated 11-23 22:15 - To zig: キスデジは遅 (2)
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