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An autumn flavor.
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Natasa-David
(462) 2008-10-01 23:18
Hi Yuriko.
Welcome to TE. This is very nice photo indeed. One minor suggestion is to post the photos in a little bit larger dimensions. It's a pitty not to have this one larger that it is.
If you need some help and suggestions, feel free to contact me.
Sincerely,
David
trekks
(14262) 2008-10-03 10:00
hello Yuriko
Welcome to TE community, although I am late to say so. Your last 5 post entries to TE are very interesting photos of Japan which are good way to start your sharing of photography on TE with us.
You are trying to capture the autumn mood of the bed of flowers at the field. A note for each post of photo here will be really helpful for viewers, so it is suggested that you write a good note for each post. All the photo sizes posted are a bit small.
In this photo there is a little tilt of level. Although the sky is dull and cloudy, perhaps you can reduce the flower space and give a little more to the mountain background at the right side, also try to use f/16 or higher and use a tripod to get good sharpness. Usually shooting early morning or evening sun will see very good light condition to bring out the strong color of the flowers.
It helps for you to read FAQ, Guidelines and ABOUT at the top of this page, regarding 800pixel and 300kb filesize and about critiques. I hope you will keep on shooting because there is no way better to improve than that. Happy shooting and sharing on TE. Thanks for sharing/tfs
bill
p/s For beginners I have given some free software download sites which may be useful for you. Follow the links in this post here, to try Photofiltre, Irfanview, Paint.net to improve your photo presentation. I would try to show closer view of the farmhouse, big trees or horse, if any.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Yuriko HOMMA (Yuriko) (31)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-09-21
- Categories: Nature
- Exposure: f/3.3, 1/125 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-10-01 20:02
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