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a girl from ciwidey


a girl from ciwidey
Photo Information
Copyright: Andri Thaslim (andrithaslim) (73)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-02
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 300D, @ ISO 100
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-07 1:04
Viewed: 946
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
we went to bandung, west java and took some pictures of cute little girl at ciwidey
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  • Great 
  • jagk Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 21] (446)
  • [2004-10-07 1:17]

Love de desaturated surounding and the saturated red of the girl. Well framing and nice sincronization of foot position

I like the composition, with the girl leaning at the right side, it helps to the effect of her hiding from the camera. The colour contrast is very good!

I like her style! very cute girl.

Nice shot and a good composition keeping the girl on the extreme right. I like how she clings on to the leg of the grownup. The re of her jacket is a nice contrast to the gray background.

  • Great 
  • iamxa Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 21 N: 191] (2594)
  • [2004-10-07 2:18]

Great composition. Just excellent situation in a wonderful image.

cute pic. like the compo, colors.

nice shot andri! I like the way you framed it around her to keep only her father's leg and the big space in front of her. it adds drama to the scene;-) Also the monochromatic surroundings that let her only be in color... Great compo and shot! I like it very much!

emotional pic, with a good contrast. compliments.

what changes did you make in PS. Anyway this photograph is very appealing.

  • Great 
  • Bogdan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 124 W: 56 N: 307] (1564)
  • [2004-10-19 10:19]

Have a similar shot, except it's a portraid. Indeed, desaturation works ok. Composition is also good, couldn't be done any other way.
Bogdan.

Great composition, and very good job with the colours the draw the attention to the girl.
You have some great people pictures in your collection.
thanks
Gordon

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