behind the shadow Photo

Photographer’s Note

i tried to catch her face, black on the left side is a black curtain. this was my best catch while she;s moving bak forth left and right :) enjoy. and feel free to critisize.

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kooreman (321) 2004-07-14 6:09

I like your composition of the curtain, girl and the silhouette. Personally I would crop away the right a bit and part of the bottom to increase focus and to lose the disturbing parts on right side. I tried a workshop. Please, let me know what you think of it.
Greetings, Jan

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burdallet (0) 2004-07-14 14:40

the use of color & black/white is good

meyavuz (739) 2004-09-16 0:10

This is an overlooked excellent photo. IT is exceptional. YOu did a great job by catching this moment. The colors and composition are perfect. YEt the expression on her face is awesome. Thanks

Saar (571) 2005-03-22 13:09

Hi Budi, this is nice. Original. Like the curly shape of the shadow and the surprised (?) look on the women's face.
Well seen, well taken.

take care Sarah

namaste_oti (705) 2005-05-02 4:10