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~ SCHOOL GIRLS ~
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Copyright: Tina Munk (tinamunk3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 469 W: 86 N: 450] (6262)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-23
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 17-40mm/4L
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1600 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-16 5:29
Viewed: 757
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
3 school girls having a break at Taman Sari - the Water Castle in Yogyakarta which used to be a rest house and pleasure park for the royal family.
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  • Iva_R Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 130 W: 57 N: 93] (1191)
  • [2007-09-16 5:55]

Bonjour,
Je trouve cette composition très belle, avec les trois regards des filles qui partent dans des directions légèrement différentes et qui invitent au rêve. J'aime également beaucoup ces couleurs chaudes et douces.
Au plaisir
Iva

Hi Tina,
I like this composition capturing these girls with their school clothes so different to the school clothes of the occidental world.
Thanks for sharing!
Good job!

Hi

Nice Capture. I like how you have left a little more space on the left hand side of the frame where the girls are looking. Nice sharpness and color.

hi Tina,
a lot of shyness ang grace in this shot.A nice harmony.
Patrick.

Hola Tina,
Me gustan los tonos pastel de esta foto y la armonia de la composición, los cuerpos marcan una diagonal pero las miradas se dispersan en tres direcciones. Muy interesante.
Saludos.
Mirari.

Beautiful composition. Nice soft color and, most of all, nice diffused light.

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3535 W: 353 N: 4237] (27503)
  • [2007-09-16 11:09]

bonsoir Tina, a wonderful cadrage.. i like this graphic line formed by girls; superb light
francine

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  • flory Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 845 W: 23 N: 984] (4543)
  • [2007-09-16 11:16]

hi Tina,
the glances of those beautiful girls are well taken..inspired me silent..and innocence!
thanks and nice evening!
Flory

Hi Tina,
Lovely scene and composition.
Nice framing and colors.
I like much the faces of theses 3 schools girls and their school clothes.
TFS,
Corinne

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  • SamB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 494 W: 58 N: 418] (1944)
  • [2007-09-17 9:40]

Hello, Tina--
Nice work, i like the warm neutral color scheme, it establishes a laid back but positive mood that seems be reflected in the posture of the girls. The composition works well, leading down into the frame as they look into it.
Thanks!
sam

Hello Tina
This is amazing
I have a photo of girls in this uniform inthe exact same place, I even wondered if you took it the same day as me.
The expression of the girls is well captured.
Regards
Daniel

Hi Tina,

Oh, I like this!!! Very hard to get a decent shot of school girls. I tried often in Indonesia, but they were always giggling and trying to practice their English hahaha. Best shots I got in Singapore since they are very much used to foreigners there and they don't mind you taking pictures nor do they get nervous that a tall Dutchman is giving attention. :-)

The shot is perhaps a slight bit soft on the faces, but it's my problem that I always overly sharpen my shots hahaha. It is a nice photograph!!

Greetings, Dennis

Hi Tina
Great capture of these girls in the school. Excellent POV, colours and light.
Very well framed and done
TFS and greetings
Aires

Hi Tina,
nice catch with an effective composition due of the stair and position of the girls. I also like their far looking mood...
A smile
Luca

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  • Morac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 995 W: 159 N: 1169] (8471)
  • [2007-12-28 11:26]

Hi Tina,
I like this composition capturing these girls with their school clothes .
The expression of the girls is well captured.
Regards
Marc

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  • kaptan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 324 W: 71 N: 71] (1334)
  • [2008-03-29 10:18]

Very good frame.nice colors.I like a lot .Greetings.Nezih

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