Man and His Works Photo

Photographer’s Note

A Bayanese pleater from north-west Lombok island is working with bamboo stuffs to create many kind of traditional kitchen (household) and farming equipments.
I made some changes on this picture: reduced the overexposed, and re-post it.

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maciekda (19587) 2004-02-16 4:04

very nice scene, but why so unsharp and small. also there is sth wrong with the white balance, the picture looks green, nice scene, but with techical problems

manny (21378) 2004-02-16 6:39

I really like your composition and color saturation here. It is quite unfortunate that it is unsharp. However, it is charming in its owh little way because of the spontaneity of your subject.

Clochette (8076) 2004-02-16 17:58

It seems to me that it is better than the previous one, Agus. It is so hard to correct over exposure. I see you used the flash : in dark places, you take a risk with the flash if white (or clear) objects are close to you.

And when do you show us more of your beautiful Indonesia ? ;-)

Didi (36182) 2004-02-16 18:30

Vous avez bien composé la scène d'un artisan à son travail, mais l'image comporte une dominante verte due à un problème de tirage, il est possible de neutraliser cette couleur avec une retouche en Workshop.

You composed the scene well of a man to his work, but the picture has a green dominant due to a problem of scaning, it is possible to neutralize this color with a final improvement in Workshop.

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egmg (345) 2004-03-02 5:26