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Pray
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Copyright: mamuk ismuntoro (mahayati) (101)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-12
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D1x, nikkor afs 17-35mm f/2,8
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-09 18:44
Viewed: 589
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Young moslem pray in front of tomb of "Siti Fatimah binti Maimun" at Gresik City, East Java. The tomb was build at 1082. Islam has entering Java on that century.
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Mamuk,
A stunning daily life shot. I love your framing but would also have to seen a shot a bit closer or more tightly cropped. Superb black and white conversion.
Cheers
Peter
Ps green later

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2006-04-10 23:32]

I agree with Peter. Closer, beyond those doors would have made a difference. The shot itself is interesting and inruguing. The b/w tonality is superb.

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