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Copyright: Pierre Sottas (padam) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 177 W: 53 N: 5] (186)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2000-12-27
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony DSC-S70
Exposure: f/7.0, 1/750 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Sky of storm. [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2003-10-15 10:21
Viewed: 1511
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
On the beach after a tropical storm, Gili Air, Indonesia.
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  • Good 
  • Eagle Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 172 W: 129 N: 74] (501)
  • [2003-10-15 11:44]

Nice picture. I think you should do the cropping you describes, there to much sand at the bottom.

Nice picture. I like the quiet and calm atmosphere, and the composition done by the wood on right bottom and the boat in the opposite side. I just think it could be more colorful and I also agree that the horizont should be off-centered. But I think you should cut the clouds, not the sand. I've done a workshop.

This photo has a forceful image of nature's power...the menacing sky pitted against that tiny boat on the sea.I tried a workshop experiment with it. However, the shot is equally appealing with the beach included.

  • Great 
  • Mary Gold Star Critiquer [C: 51 W: 9 N: 6] (737)
  • [2003-10-15 13:31]

Great! Like a painting! I love it!

If you feel like cropping, crop the sky a little. This image works because of the interesting point of view with the vast beach in such good focus. I like shots with lots of negative space like this. Bravo!

Si vous vous sentez comme 'cropping,' 'crop' le ciel. Cette image fonctionne en raison du point de vue intéressant avec la vaste plage à un tel bon foyer. J'aime des images avec un bon nombre d'espace négatif comme ceci. Bravo !

Good composition but this sky is formidable, a pretty water wall has right and a beautiful sky of storm, it is well made.

  • Great 
  • light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 18 N: 90] (857)
  • [2003-10-21 9:57]

Beautiful photos, nice planes, and horitzontals, good sand color too.
Good definition, and very good tones.

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