She works in the beach to make salt from the sea water everyday after school.
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lousat (78403) 2013-02-05 5:51
Hi Takero,beautiful capture of a moment of the daily life of this girl,i like the perspective and the simmetric composition,perfect timing too,to take we wave on her feet.Have a nice day and thanks,Luciano
COSTANTINO (56763) 2013-02-05 6:02
what a beautiful and impressive shot
the expression of the little girl
is unique and the colors very natural
I like the perspective and the symmetry
have a nice evening
yquem46 (38746) 2013-02-05 6:18
Cute little one and her bakets surrounded by the foam
Very pleasant one, TFS
wolf38 (31282) 2013-02-05 6:22
Hello Takero. Here you have captured a wonderful scene with your camera. Since I can only say: first class.
abmdsudi (44250) 2013-02-05 7:44
Pak Takero YTH
U~ēbufōmu wa migotona shikaku kōka dakedenaku, kanojo no ishō to zentai-zō ni komakai kontorasuto o tsuika surunode, anata no yori takai kakudo ga kenmeidesu. Tashika ni kawaī on'nanoko to pōzu wa, bīchi de no nichijō seikatsu no katsudō o kaita ekizochikkudesu. Kanojo no egao wa kichōna anata no shashin no taishō ni naru tame ni kanojo no iyoku o misete iru. Anata no saitaku gun kara komakai e. Omedetōgozaimasu, arigatōgozaimashita
marina7 (8055) 2013-02-05 8:55
one more magical moment! Those wayward waves and the stunning black sand are the best memories for me. Nice girl already learning the hard way of life, beautiful and happy portrait. My compliments!
GREGG (7888) 2013-02-05 8:56
symmetry and symmetry......
I really like composition
Have a nice day
chrislo (4155) 2013-02-05 9:49
Very pleasant shot of this cute courageaous girl striking a pose for the photogapher. You placed her well in the frame, using the water skins to make a symmetric composition. Her red t-shirt adds a lovely splash of colour to the scene. Great contrast between the black sand and the white sea foam. Well done.
Noel_Byrne (25230) 2013-02-05 10:15
What I really like here is how the water around the girls feet is almost like a pedestal that she is standing on, a really cool effect. She also has a great pose fot he camera, and a brilliant smile. What a class background for this shot too!
Kamilutka (8095) 2013-02-05 10:18
I really like your photos with every day scenes - they are just great. The girl in here has lovely smile and plays her role as model very well :-) The idea of placing her right on the sea shore is fantastic - I love the foam around her feet.
Thanks for sharing
jlbrthnn (76037) 2013-02-05 12:11
This is a picture moving. You pay tribute to the courage and selflessness of this little schoolgirl. A beautiful image and beautiful colors. Bravo.
Have a nice day
Ber (8233) 2013-02-05 12:36
Here you have captured a wonderful scene with this girl.
carlo62 (34414) 2013-02-05 14:29
bel ritratto, il pov alto ci mostra la spuma bianca delle onde fare da sfondo alla ragazza, che con la maglia rossa, è bene in evidenza.
npecanhuk (66816) 2013-02-05 16:10
Sharpness, exposure, colors, horizontal format and, above all, chosen pov and composition really pleased me!
TFS - congrats,
Bluejeans (64249) 2013-02-06 5:41
Ola Takero ,
Uma bela foto de vida diária desta menina que trabalha depois da escola , um vida dura para ajudar em casa , mesmo assim fez um belo sorriso para ti :) , parabéns!!
Um abraço Gonçalo
danos (87873) 2013-02-06 8:36
nice the good reportage shot from the daily life of this little school girl as she works after her school to make salt from the sea water.
Excelelnt the light and the colour management of the image.
Regards from Athens,Danos
GiovanniG (2832) 2013-02-07 0:17
Such a pleasant scene of this young girl with serf all around. Well chosen PoV and great details. Excellent as is usual for you!
mirosu (14964) 2013-02-08 17:47
An excellent portrait. Smart choice of tight crop to accentuate the small girl with splendid sharpness, great color contrast, excellent light and very good POV choice. Excellent high angle viewpoint. Very well done IMO.
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annjackman (20091) 2013-02-09 3:53
This young girl is beautifully framed. Her red shirt stands out against the black sand and the surf. She smiles at you giving you a lovely portrait. Super quality - very well done.
Kind Regards, Ann
faubry (35405) 2013-02-10 15:39
Hello Takero, beautiful shot with thid little smiling girl, colors, light, all is very dood
Miguel82 (24673) 2013-02-17 2:29
This is a wonderful shot Takero, you expose very well the hard daily life of many children in the world.
This is just an example in Bali
Excellent framing and very sharp photo
adores (38158) 2013-02-17 4:03
Not an easy work for her age and the baskets must be too heavy for her!
It's a good portrait, with a good pov! I specially like the foam surroundig her and the baskets, and also the nice smile, in spite of the hard life!
TRB (13783) 2013-02-19 12:22
a superb framing.
sharpness, colors, composition, and the water foam is excellent.
liked it very much, great ..
leo61 (0) 2013-02-22 10:26
What a great shot,taken with perfect timing and cropping!!!
Greetings from still snowy Germany,
Bournazel (0) 2013-03-06 8:36
I've been in Bali but never seen such children, carrying heavy baskets of salt
A ggod reportage !
Greatings from Angers
- Copyright: Takero KAWABATA (bukitgolfb301) (36442)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-09-04
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon 1D Mark‡W, Canon EF 16-35mm F/2.8L-USM
- Exposure: f/10.0, 1/400 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2013-02-05 5:29