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3 heavy offerings


3 heavy offerings
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Copyright: Vero Alisier (bip-bip) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 5 N: 123] (1833)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-03
Categories: Festivals
Camera: Yashica T5
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-21 16:55
Viewed: 1222
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Usually the offerings in Bali are just balanced on the head. They are made of natural products like fruits, flowers, vegetables and can be very high and very heavy
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Wouldn't you support it when you have to do steps ? Nicely captured with clear colors and sharp, you must be fast at that moment, I think moving your camera a little to the right would be nice also.

Vero, just wondering what exact town this was. The do look a little stressed, but I know taking these can be tough.

Hey, vero, did you kick the machine? Your scans are getting better. This is a very nice dailyBali shot (only in Bali, everywhere else, it would be far from daily), taken from a good angle and they are positionned very as a group, if indeed a bit dead central.

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  • sengir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 51 N: 496] (4911)
  • [2005-04-09 10:43]

composition is quite good, maybe not extraordinary, but ok for this scene.
But there are things that really diminish this picture - one is the light, very flat and cool, giving washed colours - far from perfect for such shot,
another thing is DOF - I believe it's too big, background is just distracting
third thing - point of view - I believe that if you have crouched down while taking this shot it would be much stronger

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