Photographer’s Note
Wandering around one afternoon I came across a delightful family who had a shop near my hotel in Yogyakarta. I hope the photo brings out the warmth and friendliness of the people in Indonesia.
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kinginexile
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(2440) 2004-11-15 23:12
It's a cheerful subject, they really let it out in front of the camera. 2 points bother me, the reddish tone on the face of the Mom seems unnatural, and the way you framed/cropped the shot makes her weigh against her daughter. It would have been great to get her embracing hand on the left and give more space to the young woman at the same time. A bit lacking in definition and relief too. I hope that's not too much critique for one shot.
christina
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(2040) 2004-11-16 19:42
I like this image a lot! The warm tone of this image could easily be corrected in Photoshop. I like it regardless!
Photo Information
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Copyright: Campbell Bridge (cbridge)
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(694) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2002-05-10
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Nikon F100, NikkorAF 80-200 f2.8, Fuji Provia 100F, 81A
- Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): Mother and Child [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-11-15 20:26
Discussions
- To kinginexile: Mother and daughter photo. (2)
by cbridge, last updated 2004-11-17 02:54
