~ Painting the Umbrella ~ Photo

Photographer’s Note

I found this beauty young girl and her work in the art exhibition yesterday, she just start to paint the umbrella and I didn't have more time to wait she finish her work. I like the combination colours between her look and the background colours....what do you think ?

Located : Atrium of the Citraland, West Jakarta.

Updated note : added square format on ws (special for Flavia)

friendly regards
daniel

robertosalguero, Elaine_Blath, Photo65Net, ribeiroantonio, ocskaymarci, Cretense, stego has marked this note useful

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robertosalguero (110) 2009-05-11 1:13

Hi Daniel,

I like the bright colours of this image. Definitely a beautiful combination of tones and elements. The girl see to be a master at this art. Very good perspective of this moment. Well done Daniel :-)

Roberto

Elaine_Blath (6170) 2009-05-11 1:31

Hi Daniel,

this is very colourful, bright and positive image, very well managed, the composition is superb!

Take care, Ivana

princy (4) 2009-05-11 1:39

Hi, Daniel,

Yes, the colors is wonderful and the position of the girl and the scale is also good~ Great job~
Whether it would be better if the shot was moved down and a little more space is given to the girl?

Best.

Ma

Photo65Net (43106) 2009-05-11 3:35

Hello Daniel,
Nice colors in this artist portrait.
I like the result,
Have a nice day,
JB.

ribeiroantonio (22054) 2009-05-11 20:51

Indeed, you got very nice colours all over the picture. Using the colours on her palette I am sure the umbrella will be very nice and bright. Well done.
Antonio

ocskaymarci (2510) 2009-05-12 2:46

I think dear Daniel, that this photo could also be your peculiarity. Rich colours in a great composition that is full of life! Great work! TFS!
All the best,
Marci

Flavia (10202) 2009-05-12 8:32

Hi Daniel,

Beautiful delicate subject with striking colours! I love her pose, and you chose a perfect POV to get her. I wish the bg was more blurred another option would make the format square to take some of the upper part of as its more of a distraction tham an addition to the composition.

Regards,

Flavia

Cretense (57430) 2009-05-15 6:11

Hello Daniel!

Beautiful daily life scene, excellent portrait, great framing and composition but the real eyecatcher are the blinding colours! Congratulations!

Hercules

aadilj (17950) 2009-05-16 2:41

Hi Daniel, lovely bright hues and wonderful brightness and energy. I like the composition

mikeo (12117) 2009-05-20 4:35

Hello Daniel,

Excellent, delicate composition in superb colours. Very good daily life scene, full of positive energy...I like it a lot!

Best greetings,
Mikeo

stego (22498) 2009-05-27 20:00

Hi Daniel,
Vivid colours, a gracious girl, an accomplished visual arrangement. It's a very catchy image, very beautiful.
I see nothing wrong with the main post, but as a matter of fact the WS is a more accomplished, tidy, compo.
Regards,
José