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Kiosks in Bantimurung National Park.
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(28) 2009-08-31 11:52
Hallo Mas Agus,
Hallo Sulawesi Selatan,
The beautiful Kios really draw my eyes to vanishing point along the street. I love the repetitive coca cola boxes and Kios roofs, but I think the street is too empty and it became negative space on the picture. What I learned from this picture, maybe it would be better if you got closer to Kios, minimized the negative space, emphasized the vanishing point without losing the trees background to inform Bantimurung National Park. I think you should leave the pole standing in the right edge of the picture.
Warm Regards,
Khalid
Photo Information
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Copyright: Agus Munoraharjo (Agus)
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- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2009-05-22
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/2.8
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- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-05-30 8:38
Viewed: 365
Points: 1
