"Let's go home little brother.. the rain will down very soon.. look at the sky.. the cloud is getting dark and darker.."
A photograph taken in Masceti beach in Gianyar, during melasti ceremony.. while their parents pray, the kids usually playing around.. including them.
When I saw them standing in the top of a rock, as the ceremony itself took place on a beach, and one child pointed his hand to the sky, so I decided to captured them on the frame. I really love the texture of the sky on the background..
I hope you like it.
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dumaresq_ca (1892) 2007-06-13 10:46
Une très belle image: beaux contrastes, belle netteté et belle simplicité de composition.
inanuc (0) 2007-06-13 10:47
İNAN UÇ ...
danielswalsh (13593) 2007-06-13 10:49
Simply Yoga? - Simply Awesome...
I have to admit, seldom do we see shots that look as impressive full size as they look in the thumbs- but this one is by far an exception Yoga...
Obviously some PP work has been done- but so well that there are no flaws. Excellent composition, levels, tones, colors, etc etc etc...
Hats off to you...
calaca (51) 2007-06-13 10:50
Excelente foto, la composición me gusta mucho, y el cariño que se ve en los hermanos agarrados de la mano uno cuidando del otro, excelente.
picardo (2459) 2007-06-13 10:54
Hi Yoga... this is simply fantastic.. looks like a picture taken from a movie or something like that...
TheG1 (1509) 2007-06-13 10:54
This photo is amazing, the dark sky and both kids pointing into the sky. It looks like the light on the kids is man made.
jtb1965 (123) 2007-06-13 10:55
Simply brilliant. Great composition, captured the moment and very well presented. I can see a hint of a cyan colour cast in their clothes, a little photoshop should fix that.
sowhat (1004) 2007-06-13 10:57
wonderful picture, movie-like, I love the storm colors, the beautiful sky and the light appearance of the boys. Excellent overall effect.
Thanks for sharing,
zmey (7335) 2007-06-13 11:00
A beautiful, dramatic composition. The colors and lighting are superb as well! Well done!
Out of curiosity, what was the source of light on the children? What time of the day was the photo taken? Very nice depth for f/4.5 too.
hookery (621) 2007-06-13 11:09
Que foto increible!! el efecto de iluminación es muy bueno (aunque los niños estan ligeramente sobre expuestos) gran dramatismo.
teutza (10590) 2007-06-13 11:34
the image is stunning...
the angle is fantastic..you had a great eye!!
this is a piece of art
ndb1958 (9289) 2007-06-13 11:40
Hi Yoga, this is an amazing image. Looks quite like a montage. Great job. Great lightning. Best wishes, Nino.
InasiaJones (30736) 2007-06-13 12:07
You certainly don’t deserved any comments or critiques, as you don’t implicate yourself on this site, otherwise than showing your own photos. It’s purely egoist and you should simply open your own website and show off your photos in your typical self-absorbed way. I’ve never understood your presence here, although you were one of the first I’ve put in my favorites when I arrived here.
But I can’t pass-by and not letting you know how much this shot is extremely impressive. I thought at first that it was staged, but reading your note, I have to admit that it’s possible that these kids adopt this position by themselves. The light is absolutely divine, or rather surrealist. And just like you, I really love the clouds formation. Unbelievable.
Too bad you’re only on this site to squat your images.
19 critiques since the beginning of 2007! 3 per month !!! That aint bad at all!!
All TE members are very grateful to your implication. When I read your intro, asking people to comments your images, I wish this invitation applies to you as well !!!
MichaelTrezzi (3347) 2007-06-13 12:48
Hi Yoga, excellent composition, framing and colors. Well done. TFS, Michael
atlantida (2323) 2007-06-13 13:05
This is really something, the most amazing, dramatic sky I've ever seen..if u were setting up the scene, u wouldn't get a scene like this, this happens once in a long time. I was also wandering where is that light on the boys coming from? This is really incredible, it leaves me speechless. The colors are very strong.
konok (2068) 2007-06-13 13:40
Well, it is symply amazing - and has so special atmosphere.
flpanthers1 (392) 2007-06-13 13:43
That is so awesome!!!!!! unbelievable capture. I don't know what else to say, what a shot.
jvivar (58) 2007-06-13 15:15
This looks almost as an studio picture, but it is not!
I like the sharp image of the boys superposed on the difuse of the clouds. Very nice shot!
Uzi (1240) 2007-06-13 16:10
increadible - POV, light , figures , dark heaven all of this create a amazing photography
I like it a lot
jrj (34841) 2007-06-14 3:36
Stunning capture in a perfect setting. Simply incredible...
Dpbours (222) 2007-06-14 3:40
Wonderful!!!! Very nice... What to say more...
The clouds are just magical. And the children pointing upward. Just wonderful. A great thumbs up!!!
DonGusti (861) 2007-06-14 4:29
Salam Twan -
WOW... Incredible !!! everything is perfect ;D TFS
gulnilgun (0) 2007-06-14 4:36
that's an incredible shot,
very fantastic and amazing,
faubry (35373) 2007-06-14 5:34
bonjour Yoga, wonderful shot...simple but very well cqptured; the sky and children are very beautiful,
chc (1468) 2007-06-14 6:41
Simple and striking ! I like the shot's timing. Well done
Bluejeans (64247) 2007-06-14 8:18
Ola Yoga , fantastica foto , muito bonitas as cores , gostei muito destes dois rapazes um deles apontar para o ceu !!!
Um abraço Gonçalo
psychache (1843) 2007-06-14 12:47
Beatiful photograph. Light, DOF and composition is great. Greetings. Regards
kedarvideo (106) 2007-06-14 16:00
Yes, I like it a lot. Beautiful composition and lighting. It is nearly a black and white motive with some fine colouring.
tehanu_f (6896) 2007-06-14 16:35
I checked your gallery almost everyday to see whether you posted a new photo. Just like your melasti ceremony series, this is also stunningly beautiful, highly professional and impressive. So are your light management and composition. You are a true artist.
Jeppo (17637) 2007-06-17 14:41
I do agree with Tenahu. this is not just a photo, that's art!
really impressive composition and colours.
bimo (645) 2007-07-03 2:22
Mas Yoga ....
Keren bgt fotonya ...
mpdre (1611) 2007-07-12 15:37
This is a superb photo! Beautiful light, impressive sky with those menacing clouds, and excellent capture of the boys on the hill looking to the sky...and the image is so sharp.. Absolutely gorgeous!!!
sevman13 (553) 2007-08-05 1:22
impressive colors and light.
very clear and sharp
rossofuoco (7353) 2007-09-14 3:16
Hi Yoga. Non so a quale dare i punti perchè sono tutte veramente belle. Incredibile la nitidezza e la profondità di campo. E' un tuo segreto o potresti condividerlo con me? che metodo usi?
Seb82 (2467) 2007-10-02 13:19
Excellent shot!! really impressive!
i like the POV , and the effect of clouds!
also a beautiful light and great colours!
hantulaut (3441) 2007-12-29 16:26
a decent and crisp image
wawa (692) 2008-02-17 7:46
Stances are just like in 1950 propaganda photos for the Chinese or Soviet communist Party.
Is it "Stand up for your future" or "look there's a big cloud coming with a lot of rain".
Beautiful composition. The sky is incredible
Thumbs up for this shot and all of your gallery.
arnabchat (7233) 2008-02-27 2:40
Yoga, i missed your shots for a while.
this one is just too good.... the color tones give a commercial advt feel while the image gives a cinematic feel.
greetings from Trieste,
veronika (6052) 2008-03-20 13:39
woow perfect this image, the light is wonderfullz dramatic and their point of standing seems to be too :)
ronylie (0) 2010-02-24 8:46
This photo is absolutely awesome!
i love the composition, sharpness, clouds, tones..
Glad to meet someone talented like u, especially from the same country..!
seve_1 (31) 2010-08-13 14:21
Amazing and Perfect love everything about this picture
erdna (5707) 2011-06-30 10:36
A very nice dramatic photo with good composition. I browsed your gallery and you have some very good photos.
Thank you for your comments on my photo,
pedram_abazari (929) 2012-03-15 14:38
عکس بسیار زیبا و جالبی است دوستش دارم .
عکس بسیار با معنایی است .
موفق باشی دوست من
CLODO (27498) 2012-06-15 2:38
On croirait une peinture à l'huile. Belle idée bien traduite, avec ce côté dynamique créé par la posture penchée des 2 enfants et leur geste vers le ciel chargé.
lousat (67105) 2012-06-15 2:42
This is pic is absolutely extraordinary,what a perspective,details,colors,composition,one of the best pic of this year on TE,no doubt! 2 points are not enough..ehehhe...have a nice weekend and thanks,Luciano
- Copyright: Yoga Raharja (simplyoga) (6480)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-03-17
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Camera: Nikon D70s, AF-S Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX, SanDisk Extreme III
- Exposure: f/4.5, 1/800 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Favorites - portraits/people 01, Favourites 3, Jeppo's favourites - the first 100!, Parce que 100 ne suffisent pas [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-06-13 10:44
- Favorites: 11 [view]