School is out Photo

Photographer’s Note

Well not really, there was a muslim school in Surubaya's old town, and kids semmed to interrupt their activities so that they could follow us. This kid was taking a break i a house's small courtyard. I particularly liked the squared tiles here.

Hope you like it.

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happypoppeye (4060) 2007-09-04 12:01

This is a damn good photo Daniel. Composition is excellent. The more muted color palette looks great. The scenery around the boy is really compelling, being in the little space below the street, with that red bag behind him. His expression is really nice also, along with thos big eyes and blue cap.

Quick question for you also - how close are you here, especially with that 10-20? I am thinking of getting one and am just interested.

Great work.
John

dougie (2920) 2007-09-04 12:20

Hi,
Brilliant expression with an excellent viewpoint. He looks like he's about to share a secret. Colours of the tiles, clothing and walls all go very well together with good shadows. Very enjoyable. Thanks.
Dougie.

SamB (1948) 2007-09-04 13:12

Hello, Daniel--
You weren't playing around in Indonesia... you have a lot of really close portraits, as i'm sure this one was at 14mm. While i like what you've done with it a lot, letting the lines of the courtyard echo the shape of his squatting posture and exposing it very well, and while i know that you must have been incredibly close already... this one just seems to be begging to be even closer. But really nice work here.
Thanks!
sam

MarcT (21093) 2007-09-04 13:27

Salut Daniel,
il a une belle frimousse ce petit gamin. L'angle de prise de vue renforce cette impression enjouée.
@+
Marc

barrufeto_77 (25705) 2007-09-04 22:03

Hola Daniel.

La cara del chavalín está muy bien lograda. El POV, con este fondo, me gusta.

Un saludo, Oscar

faubry (32281) 2007-09-05 2:05

bonsoir Daniel une superbe photo verticale avec cet enfant te souriant gentiment, la lumiere est bien captee, chouette
a++ francine

delkoo (34194) 2007-09-05 2:31

bonjour daniel
un portrait au 10/20, ça donne des proportions un peu bizarre, mais la photo est de bone qualité, et l'expression du gamin aux grands yeuxbien captée.

didier

brevbrev14 (372) 2007-09-06 0:42

ciao Daniel, fantastic portrait..
i like a lot your strong compo and the distortion of the lens used..
very good!
ciao!
Valeria

PixelTerror (86038) 2007-09-06 22:05

salut Daniel,
He he une vue appropriee pour la rentree des classes, mais faut dire "school starts", pas "schools's out", tu ecoutes trop de alice cooper ;-))
Bonne journee,
Jean-Yves

AmiBe (6042) 2007-09-07 13:33

Hello Daniel,
superbe cadrage, j'adore toutes ces lignes, le carrelage, la couleur de la chemise qui va bien...
Bien vu et a+

Emile (19887) 2007-09-07 21:34

Hola Daniel.
Muy buen retrato del niño con su gorra azul, esta muy bien captada, los mosaicos con sus colores hacen un buen juego en tu foto. Buen POV y definicion.
Felicitaciones.
Abrazos