between 2 windows Photo

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sarahnatalie (693) 2006-11-14 20:30

This photo is very appealing. It seems however to have lost some of its quality- maybe when you saved for web. Anyway, it is very striking and well composed otherwise. Good job!
Sarah

parbo (11014) 2006-11-14 20:34

Hello Benny,

Red band on façade is great makes your photo wonderful. My idea is: Two arched type of windows are helping your composition. I would like to see bicyclist between two windows and read more in note section. Sharpening level is your choose. Any way this is very nice. Congratulations.

Best Regards,

Parbo

smash2707 (2516) 2006-11-14 21:07

I like teh composition with the two windows and the attractive color layers. Good idea to include the man. I would sharpen a bit. Regards, Yvonne

JPlumb (3153) 2006-11-14 21:20

Hi Benny, This is a great shot. It's nice and simple and with great colour. If you had placed the rider in the centre it would have ruined the shot but you didn't. You gave him some room to ride. It might be a little sharper.

Thanks, John

mdetay (4348) 2006-11-14 21:54

Hi Benny,
Nice idea this two windows. Good POV and colors.
Very nice capture.
Cheers from Jakarta.
Michel

scalerman (25787) 2006-11-14 23:28

Benny: straight from fotoclass 101: simple, effective, colorful, into threes. regards, c

hizbul (171) 2006-11-15 0:10

Hey Ben, this is very interesting POV, I like the contast between the wall and the street, can you tell me where exactly you take this pic?

partha (13667) 2006-11-15 0:47

Perfect shot. Nicely balanced composition. The position of the person is perfect and the overall colour tonality is just excellent.
Regards.
Partha.

indcoup (4) 2006-11-15 2:51

lovely colors, great idea, but the man unfortunaltely is rather blury. Was this cos you focused on the building?

Pitoncle (3743) 2006-11-15 5:58

Bonjour Benny,
Le cadrage très symétrique de ta composition, rehaussé par de superbes couleurs, est très intéressant et suffisant pour accrocher le regard. Quant au personnage c'est la cerise sur le gâteau.
A bientôt sur TE pour de nouvelles aventures.
Gérard