Child in the rail way Photo

Photographer’s Note

It's a daily life in Central Java Indonesia, childs always play sorrounding the rail way track event its absolutely dangerous.

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Amandine (1026) 2004-11-18 3:05

Welcome on TE ! This first shot is really nice. Chidren seem to smile to another photographer, there is a lot of hapiness. Your composition iwth the rail way is well done.

arnabchat (6984) 2004-11-18 3:16

good opening shot, Bimo!
good to see smiling faces, good geometry of rail tracks. good light and BW foto.
wishes, Arnab

ps: add some intro to your profile.

RGatward (19737) 2004-11-18 4:06

Welcome to TE Bimo, a great first posting. Good subject, and good use of DoF. Yes, it looks really dangerous, does nobody stop them. What is the casualty rate?

kozerog (1115) 2004-11-18 5:15

Very interesting shot with nice DOF. I like emotions on their faces also.

Kenny10pin (19301) 2004-11-18 6:31

great dof here, I like the kids smiling too, well done great work as usual

ishai (4093) 2004-11-18 6:57

What a great composition Bimo
Great daily life shot
Very good expressions
Very good DOF

GrahamB (939) 2004-11-18 7:41

Great shot. I like the use of the lines to lead your eye into the shot and the shallow depth of field. Not the safest of places to play!

joseelias (367) 2004-11-18 8:31

Welcome to TE!

Great expression on their faces! Also the use of BW strenghned the composition. Good DOF.

Personaly I think I would prefer an horizontal framing placing them in the left lower corner, but it still is a nice image.

Just a tip about TE. Don't be afraid to write critiques. People appreciate constructive critiques with helping advises, and will generate attention over your work.

Steft (5962) 2004-11-18 12:02

Welcom to TE. There's not much I can add to the other comments. It's just a very great picture.

alimo3 (6826) 2004-11-18 19:41

Hi bimo,
Very nice image for this BW.
i like your unusual composition and the good use of DOF that drives the look straite to the subject.
Bravo.

Tom

anil-ahuja (327) 2005-01-24 4:43

Very nice picture. the rails create nice lines.

BAKO (1683) 2005-07-01 18:54

Hi Bimo,
superb shot with lovely children

Great

BAKO

Mapeix-Br (251) 2005-12-25 12:40

Very good DOF!
Very good expressions!
What a great BW picture!!!
Great daily life shot!
Congratulations!

mariani (7) 2006-02-24 19:38

Not a good place for chatting

Preetie (431) 2007-08-10 5:15

Hi,
I love this image of children being children, group dynamics,naughtiness..everything is reflected well.Great POV and I think the DOF definitely add the magic to this pic..I love the B&W effect..how about adding just a wee bit of noise to give a picture from childhood effect.
Thanks for sharing ..love the shot
Preetie