Photographer’s Note
It's a daily life in Central Java Indonesia, childs always play sorrounding the rail way track event its absolutely dangerous.
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Amandine
(1026) 2004-11-18 3:05
Welcome on TE ! This first shot is really nice. Chidren seem to smile to another photographer, there is a lot of hapiness. Your composition iwth the rail way is well done.
arnabchat
(6984) 2004-11-18 3:16
good opening shot, Bimo!
good to see smiling faces, good geometry of rail tracks. good light and BW foto.
wishes, Arnab
ps: add some intro to your profile.
RGatward
(19737) 2004-11-18 4:06
Welcome to TE Bimo, a great first posting. Good subject, and good use of DoF. Yes, it looks really dangerous, does nobody stop them. What is the casualty rate?
kozerog
(1115) 2004-11-18 5:15
Very interesting shot with nice DOF. I like emotions on their faces also.
Kenny10pin
(19301) 2004-11-18 6:31
great dof here, I like the kids smiling too, well done great work as usual
ishai
(4093) 2004-11-18 6:57
What a great composition Bimo
Great daily life shot
Very good expressions
Very good DOF
GrahamB
(939) 2004-11-18 7:41
Great shot. I like the use of the lines to lead your eye into the shot and the shallow depth of field. Not the safest of places to play!
joseelias
(367) 2004-11-18 8:31
Welcome to TE!
Great expression on their faces! Also the use of BW strenghned the composition. Good DOF.
Personaly I think I would prefer an horizontal framing placing them in the left lower corner, but it still is a nice image.
Just a tip about TE. Don't be afraid to write critiques. People appreciate constructive critiques with helping advises, and will generate attention over your work.
Steft
(5962) 2004-11-18 12:02
Welcom to TE. There's not much I can add to the other comments. It's just a very great picture.
alimo3
(6826) 2004-11-18 19:41
Hi bimo,
Very nice image for this BW.
i like your unusual composition and the good use of DOF that drives the look straite to the subject.
Bravo.
Tom
Mapeix-Br
(251) 2005-12-25 12:40
Very good DOF!
Very good expressions!
What a great BW picture!!!
Great daily life shot!
Congratulations!
Preetie
(431) 2007-08-10 5:15
Hi,
I love this image of children being children, group dynamics,naughtiness..everything is reflected well.Great POV and I think the DOF definitely add the magic to this pic..I love the B&W effect..how about adding just a wee bit of noise to give a picture from childhood effect.
Thanks for sharing ..love the shot
Preetie
Photo Information
- Copyright: bimo wiratnanto (bimo) (641)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-09-19
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon 300D, Canon 75-300mm
- Exposure: f/5.0, 1/320 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): sohrab's favourites [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-11-18 2:56
- Favorites: 2 [view]








