Photographer’s Note
Baby from a Dani's village in West Papua.
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(317) 2009-02-21 2:23
Fine composition of this young child. The colour blance is also very good. White details are clear.
Bill
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(5944) 2009-02-21 3:16
Hello Jacek,
This child looks anything but happy!
However, it is a typical, expression, applied when a child is unsure about something, and you have captured it well.
The light and the details are really good.
My suggestion would be to have left a little more space beneath the chin so that the viewer can more easily focus on that part of the face; it is second only to the eyes for effect.
Kind regards,
Bev :-)
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jacek Pawlicki (jacekpa)
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(357) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2009-01-23
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-02-21 2:03
Viewed: 630
Points: 4
