Photos: Earth >> Asia >> India >> South >> Kerala >> Kollam

Register

 

SILENT SYMPHONY

<< Previous Next >>
SILENT SYMPHONY
Photo Information
Copyright: JEAN PAUL (japiey) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1611 W: 315 N: 2211] (8079)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-20
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-04 10:34
Viewed: 413
Points: 80
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
THE ANSWER IS..

"I felt if all questions were answered
Looking in your eyes, my dear love..
Ocean of smiles waves at my heart
Still your heart has another question..
Time grew tall, we drifted apart a day
Yet you held me close in your heart
I longed to hold you in my walk
To the edge of my dreams, heaven
Seasons play the symphony in silence
Blossoms again a smile from heart
Dances the butterfly in me again
Moments travel back in dear hearts
I stay in your arms, safe again..
Everytime we met, our smiles kissed
Waiting the world to know forever
We are in love, my dear woman.. !!!!"

*************************

SHOT AT ADVENTURE PARK IN KOLLAM,MY LAND.

"LOVE, the dream of HEARTS !!"
~jp


"One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life; That word is love."
~ Sophocles
(496 BC - 406 BC) was the second of the three ancient Greek tragedians whose work has survived to the present day. His first plays were written later than those of Aeschylus, and earlier than those of Euripides.

pelin, Deepforest, dareco, gokanlam, rossofuoco, syd1946, matylda76, jonathan_hart, amazon, leo61, gracious, isabela_sor, Valerka, papagolf21, pboehringer, bostankorkulugu, JanD, jusninasirun, Royaldevon, COSTANTINO, stego, temmel, robertosalguero, Emile, rigoletto has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekEarth members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekEarth members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Deepforest: welcome...japiey 2 05-04 12:03
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

hi Jean!
this is so beautiful. u have nicely captured the mood.

regards,
Nabarun.

  • Great 
  • pelin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 137 W: 119 N: 280] (1294)
  • [2008-05-04 10:44]

Hello friend! What a 'lovely' shot! I can see a LovE sitting between those lovers. Good shot in beautiful scenery.
Thanks,
pelin

Hi Jean Paul,
Great pov and wonderfull compo. Amazing lights and colors. The branches and leaves above builds a nice natural framing.
TFS and best regards
MESUT ILGIM

Dear JP, this is a nice composition with the leaves of the mangoe tree almost caressing the water... Very romantic scene, ideal place for having a nice conversation - surprising that the couple was facing you and not the water !
(Face of the man could be a bit more clear, easy to do this with photoshop - but it's not that essential, we can guess anyway)...
Best regards,
Cath.

Hi Jean Paul,
Nice, peaceful scene... Great composition with that natural tree's canopy... Fantastic colours. Well done my friend.
Best regards,
Andrzej
PS. I plan to visit your country in the end of May :o) My main destination will be Bhutan, but I will spend 5 days in India (Assam, Orissa, Kolkata).

  • Great 
  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2763 W: 575 N: 2830] (34063)
  • [2008-05-04 11:29]

Silent symphony... This is just proper title to this scenery. Calm place, this pair... I really like it.


Regards my dear friend.

  • Great 
  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1149 W: 22 N: 410] (6088)
  • [2008-05-04 11:40]

Very romantic! :) A such a pretty place. A beautiful note as well. TFS

Hi Jean, lovely moment.. branches give nice effect.. and the place of the couple is also great.. the girl is in safe again:) Very nice..
ReLa

Ciao JEAN
Foto romantica ben eseguita con ottimi colori.
Bel lavoro.
Renzo

Hello Jean Paul,
Nicely composed with the tree in the frame and the couple in romantic moment.And the answer is... to find such a lovely moments in our life.I like it very much,dear friend...

stay well and have a nice week,
Thomas

Hi J.P.
great shot and great poem
you are a romantic person:)
nice capture, lovely colours
the best of you;
tfs,
regards Karolina

lovely indeed, this silent symphony is so well composed ;) & the message is love is so well expressed :)
regards
jo

  • Great 
  • amazon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 486 W: 0 N: 396] (2966)
  • [2008-05-04 12:46]

thats a love story from indian...
beautiful composition,like dream...
have nice week(iyi haftalar)
dear friend(sevgili arkadasim)
iffet

Another beautiful shot, JeanPaul!
The framing is superb with the overhanging branches and the couple are perfectly placed in your composition. Beautiful colors and a very intimate and touching scene. Well captured, my dear friend! Many thanks and warmest wishes,
Shelly

Hi my friend,
A lovely and romantic scene. This atmosphere of this place is calm and give us peace.
Regards
Maria

  • Great 
  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3360 W: 303 N: 6406] (27420)
  • [2008-05-04 15:14]

Hi Jean Paul!
You found a great POV and captured a very nice scene.The image has a romantic atmosphere and it`s nice to see some palmtrees in he distance.
Regards,Leo

Hello JP,
Perfect spot well captured for people in love!
good pov in perfect use of the tree branches as silhoutte to let the spot so outstanding!
a perfect poem for the image too
well done always
greeting
Tony

  • Great 
  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2899 W: 87 N: 4820] (16692)
  • [2008-05-04 23:04]

Beautiful, very romantic, the composition is perfectly balanced with the couple on the right under the natural arch of the tree. Excellent work.

Perfect and lovely title ....And your note says something about you,isn't it?:)The peaceful atmosphere and the superb decor fit together and create a poem in image
All the best
Isa

My dear friend! another sweet view for us, thank you so much! A lovely couple framed by leaves and water: what better for wandering to be there like them? No wind, no waves and I guess that they enjoy some nice scent!
Ciao, namaste from Italy!!

Livia

  • Great 
  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3355 W: 343 N: 4036] (25805)
  • [2008-05-05 1:58]

hello JP, i like this simple photo, like a romantic dream, we cann seems atmospher; good inclusion of tree.
have a good day
francine

Hello,Poet,
There's so much music and quiet romance in this shot.
I can feel the genuine interest with which the man is listening to this slender lady.
Well seen and well presented and the tree seems to be blessing the two lovers.
TFS
I'll be back
Valerka:)

Bonjour, mon très bon ami Jean-Paul,
Chut ! Pas un bruit, s'il vous plaît ! Fermez les yeux et, dans ce silence, écoutez l'ange passer...
Image très bien réalisée donnant à cette composition une envie de calme et de silence dans un environnement bien agréable.
Amitiés.
Philippe

hi jean,

this is so beautiful - and romantic. and a lovely note as always. very well done my friend.

regards
somak

Hi, JP -

A nice romantic shot, well-framed by the overhanging tree. I like the way their shirts add splashes of color to the overall green tone.

Best,
Dan

Jean Paul,
excellent! The composition with the tree providing a frame for the couple gives the impression of a cove, protection and safety for the couple in there moment of love.
Peter

a well composed scene of romantism... the tree adds a lot to the mood, a real good one jean paul... i like their attitudes a lot...

all the best...

korkut

Ciao Jen Paul,
very romantic moment that you have captured. quiet atmosphere and excellent composition with of the beautiful colours and excellent light. as to the usual one pleasant .
Giorgio

  • Great 
  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3542 W: 384 N: 5676] (19526)
  • [2008-05-05 20:34]

Hi JP,
A good 'paparazzi' POV and nice use of the tree to capture and frame this "intimate" moment!
The light fifferences are well managed.
Greetings
Laurent

Hi Jean Paul,
what a lovely shot,great poem
compliments

The tree has been used as a superb prop in this composition of high mood. I love the perspective has been taken and your intelligent pov. Good work jaipy

  • Great 
  • JanD Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 197] (5223)
  • [2008-05-06 1:51]

Howdy Japiey!
Nice scene. Good perspective. Nice light and colors. Original picture.
Regards!

Hello JP. Pleasant view of the scene here. Good composition with the couple having their romantic time. Thanks for sharing and well done. Regards. Jusni

Hello J.P.

Now who wouldn't have romantic inclinations in a setting like this! I can almost hear the soft rustling of the leaves and the gentle lapping of the water!

The hanging trees make a huge contribution to the pleasing composition of this shot and the nicely off-centre focal point completes it.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

  • Great 
  • Anna-- Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 568 W: 54 N: 220] (4449)
  • [2008-05-06 10:32]

Ciao JP,
excellent romantic scene taken and very nice title. The framing is very beautiful. Very good colors and composition
Anna

Hello my friend,
Your photos are so sensitive and delicate
so well done..Congratulations.I like the poems
a lot and the way you present your ideas.
Your notes are very useful ,.necessary and
important.
Greetings from Greece my friend
Costantino

  • Great 
  • stego Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3200 W: 556 N: 4020] (12352)
  • [2008-05-07 5:48]

Hi Jean Paul,
I bet his words are as sweet as the mangos that the tree above them grows... :-)
It's a lovely romantic scene, in a very suitable place for flirting. The framing done by the leaves is wonderful.
Regards, José.

Jean,
beautiful moment did u capture,lovely romantic scene.
I like how they have forgotten d world around them.
Nanni,
Linda

Hello Jean Paul,

What a beautiful place and peaceful moment to enjoy each other's company. The image is very well composed with the couple nicely placed on the right. They seem quietly enjoying the moment. Good colours and fine perspective. Thanks JP.

Roberto

  • Great 
  • Emile Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3801 W: 135 N: 3945] (14766)
  • [2008-05-11 14:20]

Hola Jean Paul.
Excellent shot with the splendid place to seat and think about love. Very well captured with the romantic couple and the tree producing a natural frame, good POV, colors and composition.
Well done. TFS.
Best regards

Love is the same intimacy everywhere, be it presented in Paris by Grazyna, or in Kollam by JP.
That tender moment of sheltered happiness, an endless moment of tiny heart beats, steam all over the aura, light and shade making love in thousand leaves, the love of blue and red...
All the best,
Deniz

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF