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MOTHERS POEM


MOTHERS POEM
Photo Information
Copyright: JEAN PAUL (japiey) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1826 W: 334 N: 2568] (9295)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-04-19
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Adorable Kids [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-19 7:48
Viewed: 485
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
LITTLE DELIGHTS..

"Heartbeats in womb,heaven in mother
Bouquet of smiles,delights mother..
Treasure in her, wonder of life
A poem every mother writes,her kid.
A rose, an angel, mother is always
Pure in love and compassion,ever
Where words fail, her soul wins
World is in her heart,mother's smiles
To the world opens her dream,her kid
In her it's not the duty or sacrifice..
It's fragrance of the gold, mother
Glittering more than any light,true.
Guides the first steps, lyrical
Mother,a word beyond definitions..!!"

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SHOT AT KOLLAM, MY LAND.

THIS IS MY DEDICATION FOR ALL MOTHERS..

First breath, First step, First smile..
Mother's delight of her kid....
~ jp


"My mother is a poem
I'll never be able to write,
though everything I write
is a poem to my mother.

~ Sharon Doubiago
a native of Los Angeles, has a Master’s Degree in English from California State University at Los Angeles.Her most recent published book is The Husband Arcane.She received two Pushcart Awards for both poetry and fiction.

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To robertosalguero: Thank youjapiey 1 04-25 01:20
To siamesa: Hi Dear Friend..japiey 2 04-20 04:46
To siamesa: Dear Mariaisabela_sor 2 04-20 04:44
To BitterMoon: Multumesc :)japiey 2 04-19 08:12
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Hello my friend Jean

A real delight,great dedication to all Mother`s.
I know what you mean with your dedication and note.

She`s a cutie,two big eyes and the little teeth`s are the cutiest.Very charming.

My kind regards,
Lucian

Hi dear friend,
I loved your message to mothers, mainly because mine is in a hospital with several illness.I hope that she will go home soon.
Abraços
Maria

Jean,each mother will love to read your note,your poem...Thank you,my dear!
This smile worths one million dollars ,but nobody can buy it...only with love someone can get such a smile
Her black deep eyes are smiling too
All the best for her,for you and for sweet Kiran
Isa

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2849 W: 611 N: 3031] (36627)
  • [2008-04-19 11:30]

There is something poignant in this photo. I am really impressed. Superb portrait. No doubt.
Regards my dear friend.

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1449 W: 34 N: 606] (8476)
  • [2008-04-19 13:01]

A beautiful little smile, I love those two little teeth!! Beautiful eyes!!! A lovely portrait. TFS

Hello my friend JP,
A real delighted portrait alright here!
the joyful face with a warm smile, what can you ask for more in life?
of course, a poem goes with it, just perfect
well done
have a wonderful weekend!
Tony

a happy child is beyond everything, isnt it JP... how beautiful eyes she has, and a cute smile... very nice my friend...

all the best...

korkut

a friendly glance, the beauty of youth, in a good way you captured this dainty child
regards
jo

Hello Dear JP,
This child is beautiful, and your capture too.
I loved your poem, although I am not a mother.
Have a nice Sunday,
Hülya T.

Hi Jean Paul,
Great expression well captured dear friend.
Well chosen the back and white for the composition. I like the dedication and note
Have a nice Sunday
Aires

Jean,
this is a beautiful B/W portrait of this cute little angel!!
Look at her eyes,look at her smile & at her lovely expression..:)
A very well captured photo & beautiful dedication to all mother`s.
Nanni!
Linda

Hi JP,
A perfect potrait ,she has a beautiful smile and big eyes :o)
Have a nice weekend,
Zeynep

Hello Jean,
A pure and innocent smile, everyone will love to see this cute little girl and they always reminded mine at home. A nice portrait with perfect b&w format. tfs

daniel

Hello Jean Paul
Cute little girl with her big eyes and very happy expression!
A nice tribute for all the mothers!
Cheers
Marilyn

HI!!


Your B/W photographs have always delighted my hear t and this one is superbly fascinating.. One of the best masterpiece i have ever seen.. The expression is perfect ! I like her eyes that looks on the camera with sweet looks and also like the smile.. Truly a delightful capture!!! Thanks my friend!!


HAVE A SUPERB DAY!,
Sayan

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12338 W: 246 N: 16219] (64846)
  • [2008-04-21 5:10]

Hello Jean-Paul,

I loved your message to mothers, I think that we as men not good can understand the feeling of a mother to her child.
A pity that you in WS not have placed the colour picture.
The two teeth and the smile of the child his very nice.
Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
John.

Hi,Poet,
This would be a nice tribute on to on two occasions-Mother's Day and the 1st June, the International Day of Children.
It's a lovable Indian , presumably, girl with a sweet smile.
Excellent capture and mood.
TFS
Valerka:)
I'll be back soon.

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3176 W: 400 N: 4493] (16067)
  • [2008-04-22 2:00]

Hi Jean Paul,

That here a quite pretty smile !!! This close-up is really tenderizing, I like much and it is a nice homage with all the moms, thank you Jean Paul.

With all my friendships and with soon,

Jean-Charles

the smile on her face is everything.. and very nice words to mothers.. i can feel the feelings of the motherhood with your nice poem altough i'm not a mother yet.. i like your B&W choice too..

Tebrikler,
ReLa

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  • adores Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2544 W: 48 N: 3517] (11345)
  • [2008-04-22 16:45]

Hi Jean!
Very good portrait. The child has a very sweet expression, I like the two little theeth:) I like it in B&W. Good homage to all mothers!

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  • sagar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 380 W: 65 N: 284] (1783)
  • [2008-04-24 3:12]

Hi Jean,
What a beautiful child.. Absolutely splendid looks on the face ... heavenly may be the right word.
Wonderful portrait.
Sagarneel.

Hello Friend,
Adorable little child and the little dot on the forehead is very interesting. I always wondered what the dot means but I have never made the time to find out. Excellent black and white rendering and well composed image. Thanks Jean Paul.

Roberto

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