Photographer’s Note
"Kachro Mane Aapo"...meaning give me your rubbish. This is what the writing on the bin means. The cans have been donated by a local charity named Manav Sadhna, whom work alongside the Ramapir slum community.
Gauriben is a ragpicker... (collects rubbish from the street to be recycled). The women are paid 2-10 rupees per kilo for various materials (paper, plastic, polythene). There are numerous people in the chain whom buy and sell the collected items on for more money. The value increases upto four times once the middlemen have taken their share. The chap who owns the pitha (sorting pit), can make anything upto 2lakhs per month.
Rubbish means big money...
...for some. Gauriben is a widow...mother of two. The sole breadwinner in her household. She rarely leaves the slum, unless she is out ragpicking. It may sound like rubbish...(excuse the pun!), but this kachro is her window to the world...
update I just bumped into Gauriben outside. I was on my way back to my air conditioned office after my lunchbreak...I was gasping for water after a short walk, struggling in the sweltering heat. My colleague walked on quickly back to the office as I spoke to Gauriben. It is 41degrees out there. She had just finished ragpicking...Its almost 2pm - she will have started at 7-8am. She will walk back to the slum with her 20-30kilos of rubbish, through busy traffic, dodging rickshaws, bikes, buses and other pedestrians...Ramapir is 2-3km away. She gave me a beaming smile as she walked off into the smokey distance...
Project: Underexposed - Lights in Dark Spaces
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stiginthedump
(1823) 2007-04-16 1:20
I can't decide whether or not I like the background here. On the one hand i like how the picture is split up into four parts - the woman, the bag, the motiff on the wall and the window. But on the otherhand i find it a bit cluttered and feel that some extra pp is needed here. Maybe some pp on the barrel distortion, some extra sharpening, and making the photo lighter would be better.
Thanks
roamermark
(1588) 2007-04-16 1:42
Hi Kaj,
Haven't been around in a long long while. Floundering photgraphically in terms of finding what I want to shoot, finding the time to do it and what not.
I like this a lot. It seems more 'straight' and accessible than some of your past work but I think that is only a surface opinion...really there is a lot going on in there if the viewer really wants to approach it with a critical eye.
Nicely done
Mark
dvlazar
(6486) 2007-04-16 2:15
Beautiful portrait - its all very gentle and soft, what with the lighting and the colors used.
Nice inclusion of the objects behind her.
David.
prezntime
(3945) 2007-04-16 3:20
Well Kajal...not this time...Interestingly enough, it seems as though you are going through the motions. We had such a strong photo just prior to this shot, that we've come to expect better...this photo is the downside of sharing photographs with other people, we just don't quite get the hook...
I mean, this photo is better than most, but not up to the quality that you've laid before us...we can see richer colors and figures in your previous documents, don't hold back.
Regards,
Chris.
Furachan
(0) 2007-04-16 4:09
Your work with light and color is of a very high standard lately. Another fine, muted and therefore "discreet" portrait which allows this woman's soul to emerge...at its own pace, and on its own terms.
bw,
francis
luisafonso
(858) 2007-04-16 5:14
Great portrait Kajal. Your color rendition is very beautiful. I like your toning very much. You always have a great care presenting shadows and that gives a very unique touch to your photos. The background is very beautiful. I particularly like how you placed the woman between the diagonal of flowers. Can't really think of a better composition and the ventilation grid on the top left even plays an important role here. A great photo!
prantik
(1134) 2007-04-16 8:07
Hey Kajal
India inspired you and I think your found your own vision. In addition to the high aesthetic and technical qualities, these pictures, in a somewhat subliminal way, communicate to me your discovery of your own roots. It's common among many Indian migrants to feel somewhat guilty of leaving their homelands and not contributing to the much needed developments of the country. There is a thirst for atonement among us which hardly ever gets quenched as we are not courageous and selfless enough to leave our comfortable lives in the west. You, born and brought up in the west, carry out our "duty" with tremendous sincerity, sensitivity, grace, and dignity. You genuinely care about the people you are working with and that is strongly evident in your work. I have been closely following your work, even when I was on sabbatical from TE, and your work consistently moved, inspired and haunted me. Keep up the great work and continue to take us through the journey.
Best regards from freezing Ithaca (It is middle of April, and it has been snowing all day). I am tempted to go down to Mexico for a week.
Prantik
fixed
(3831) 2007-04-17 10:06
hello Kaj
he, he, flower power come back :)
I like your composition and the feeling in this photo
wonderful woman and the washed green wall/texture add value
very nice one
nono
thank you for your many comments always appreciated
Luko
(13894) 2007-04-18 16:52
The three flowers, guess who's the third.
Seeing your last efforts, I wonder at what height you'll take your photography, I'm also eager to see it. One of real strength (I mean out of your many skills besides the empathy with your subjects and your sense of composition that makes a static image terribly dynamic) is your color palette. I'm really flabbergasted each time with the complexity of he colors you include in your photo yet their match very accurately altogether (here pink, green & dark blue).
Must be something really feminine.
everlasting
(10898) 2007-04-20 3:01
Not only a very nice portrait in its own right, you are capturing much, much more of your women. Your closeness to your subjects lives is so tenderly and respectfully portayed.
vagabondtravels
(6113) 2007-04-21 5:07
Hi Kajal
Great portrait. Good colors. What an interesting character you have captured here. She is full of emotion. Nice bg. Anyhow well done.
Ben
s10001in
(1485) 2007-04-21 8:35
Space..or I can say Emptyness..
May be biggest strength of this Photo.
-Regards,
PeterC
(2242) 2007-04-26 9:22
Kajal,
This is quite a series. Another fascinating portrait and gorgeous colours and that subdued light. Great work.
Cheers
Peter
ALSOM
(6616) 2007-05-07 6:42
Lovely portrait with mutted colors (surprising for Indoa ;o) ?
All elementts are well positioned making this portrait very appealing.
Thanks, Alain -
eleparc
(24059) 2007-05-14 6:46
i am thrilled by the repetition of the flower pattern on the wall! it makes an excellent BG for this portrait!
Congrats!
Eric
bishansamaddar
(862) 2007-07-05 4:49
the story is absolutely rivetting.
compositionally, a commendable achievement. the flower and the window...
are we expecting a book? :)
touristdidi
(8561) 2007-08-11 9:58 [Comment]
Photo Information
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Copyright: Kajal Nisha Patel (kajspice)
(4534) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-04-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EFS 18-55mm f3.5-5.6
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): Underexposed: Lights in Dark Spaces [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-04-16 1:14
Discussions
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