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• Furachan (0)
• [2006-09-24 5:14]
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Hello Adam, I must say I am increasingly fon of centralized compos - this one does not disturb me at all. Most striking thing about this boy, is the look in his eyes. Quite extraordinary. Nice B/W work.
Cheers,
Francis

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• jinju (14241)
• [2006-09-24 5:29]

Witaj Adam,

centralnie skadrowane, coz moze to przeczy regulom ale nic z tego:) Masz tu dwoch fanow, i mam nadzieje ze bedzie ich wiecej. Nie ma to zdjecie tak ciezkiego klimatu jak poprzednie ale bycmoze to zdjecie lepiej sie sprzeda na TE. Ja zwykla konsekwencja z b/w, swietna technika przerobki na cz/b i te OCZY, fantastyczne, piekne oczy.

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• KevRyan (20413)
• [2006-09-24 5:34]

To me this image conforms to two classical compositional ideas - it is far from being a 'lost in the centre' composition. For me the image is a classical central triangular shape facilitated by all of the shapes within the posture of the boy, the tub and the surrounding lines. Secondly. it conforms to a rarer compositional device. that of the closely framed central circle - in this case the way the boys eyes break the bubble' is just magical....lovely work, tone and a delightfully observed moment!

best wishes Kev

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• woodyman (222)
• [2006-09-24 5:48]

Great use of wide angle (I think) and the light catching the boys face is good. I like the way he looks like he's really trying hard to look anywhere but into the camera
Cheers
Ian