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ben4321 (9875) 2007-10-11 10:53
Wonderful light here Om, and I like the way you framed the shot with the curving line of people and camels leading gracefully in from the corner. It really draws the eye into the scene.
It's a bit 'blocky', especially in the bottom left corner - that's only to be expected at such a small file size of 48kb. Try posting nearer the 200kb maximum to get the best quality possible.
I'm sure the original slide looks great.
avene (12675) 2007-10-11 11:14
I agree with Ben, excellent shot. love the gentle curve (although in an ideal world the figures in the foreground would not stand in from of the figures in the background), and the clear silhouettes of the water bottles caried by the women. beautiful colours and light, but the shot could use some noise reduction (may it's just the effects of compression since the file is really small).
thanks for sharing,
p.s. a note would've been great to learn more about the shot and the situation it was taken.
Wandering_Dan (3449) 2007-10-11 12:15
This is a great composition - the curve of the dunes with the camels in silhouette, and the line of women almost perfectly positioned in front of them. And a golden sunset behind it all. Trouble is, I can't really see the women, especially the ones in front of the camels. So I did a small WS to bring them out a bit more, without losing the rest of the silhouette effect.
And I agree with Ben and Kristine: You're allowed to use a 200KB file; you should use it all.
sayeed_rahman (6370) 2007-10-11 12:19
A desert composition is not what ive come across often on TE..this one is a well timed and thought out one..the retreating women with the vessels on their head, the men with the camel..against the glowing sand dune gives quite an exotic effect..
Is the man at the left corner carrying a musical instrument..if yes what is it ???
A note would help bro..your feedback and details on the pic is imp too !
ahaberal (6469) 2007-10-11 12:29
That is one superb scene ... wonderfully captured. The colors and contrast is just perfect. Well composed ... excellent work! Tfs
timaya (121) 2007-10-11 23:41
Wspaniałe zdjęcie! Bardzo dobra kompozycja, światło! Zgadzam się w zupełności z wypowiedziami moich poprzedników:-)
dario10 (2765) 2007-10-14 13:31
very,very nice photo,wonderful light and contrast
claudeD (35495) 2007-11-01 10:18
very good picture which I like very much because of your excellent composition.Wonderful warm colors and much life in the image....A+++
With regards from Luxembourg
leo61 (0) 2007-11-19 12:55
Wonderful light and good composition with these people and camels walking on top of the curve of this dune.It`s a great view at their silhouettes against the wonderful colored sky.
A little note about the location would be nice.
- Copyright: om mishra (ommishra) (1160)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-05-16
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Nikon F65, Tamron 28-200 AF, fuji pro
- Exposure: f/11, 1/15 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-10-11 10:47
- Favorites: 1 [view]