This photograph captures a young Rajasthani man playing the local instrument called as Ek tara. The colours on the white background and the expression on this mans face attracted me to click.
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willperrett (7040) 2014-08-09 10:45
This is an excellent street grab-shot: I agree with you that the musician's expression is the key element. Maybe you could have cropped/framed a little tighter, and perhaps straightened the verticals, but these issues don't detract from a very pleasing environmental portrait.
CLODO (30256) 2014-08-10 2:11
First of all, welcome on TE
This is a good portrait in situatiion, and the look of the man seems to accept you as a photographer; but your image is tilted (look at the window on the right), and can be easily corrected (see Will's WS). Another detail: the plastic bottle half hidden, but which is not in the mood of the picture.