Photographer’s Note
Taken with my new Sony k750i Mobile Camera.
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lcelvenes
(0) 2007-02-05 12:22
Hi Daxesh
There´s nothing wrong with this photo, by any means, but it doesn´t really have a lot to offer either.
1) The background is in my opinion too visible for a macro shot like this (taken with a cell phone camera, I realize that limits your possibilities). For this kind of a shot, the background would have looked better with a smoother bokeh.
2) You´ve added only a minimum of information for your shot, which also limits the viewers experience of this photo. Some info on the location and the photo in general is important on TE, as it is part of the package, so to speak.
3) In line with the idea of TE, I think this photo better fits a site like TN (TrekNature: www.treknature.com), as it doesn´t convey too much in terms of travel experience.
I realize this critique may sound harsh, but that´s not my intention, but I think you should check out TN if you like these types of photographs. Lots to choose from.
Lars-Christian
Photo Information
- Copyright: daxesh tailor (djtailor) (84)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-01-26
- Categories: Nature
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/640 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-02-05 12:10








