BLACK MOODS ... Photo

Photographer’s Note

ONE BLACK DAY..
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"What happened today?
All day was different..
You were there, but
Silent only with me.
Not even a sign of smile
Not even a kiss of love..
Maybe I did some wrong..
Remember my words,
No secrets between us..
Yet this happened..
Silence kills me fast
I need to understand
What was different today !
I felt I lost something dear
I don't want another day like this..
Still I have this feel in me,
Trust, my heart never lies..
I don't understand myself
I don't understand you today..
Nothing to talk;what to say ?
It's hard to be far away
When you are smiling so near..
I learned the lesson..
But remember always
Am sincere, true to you..
I feel your mood, yet
Am rejected today !!!! "
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SHOT AT VELI TOURIST VILLAGE,
TRIVANDRUM.
Beauty of the shades.
Take care, see you soon,
Sorry for this day !!!

"Sometimes a scream is
better than a thesis."
- Ralph Waldo Emerson (1803-1882)

adores, edytungkal, crckt, shevchenko, nirajsinha, isabela_sor, sagar, bruce_wayne has marked this note useful

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adores (15821) 2007-08-06 17:50

Hi Jean!
I like the effect created by the big shadows in the foreground and then the background in the sun with the colourful boats.

edytungkal (4521) 2007-08-06 18:33

Good Morning Jean,
An interesting picture captured with the focus on the big shadow on FG, it really contrast with nice blue sky as background. The boats inside make it more beauty.
Wishing you a good mood everyday...
Thanks for sharing

daniel

AROBN54 (10797) 2007-08-06 18:45

Hi, Jean Paul,
I like the way you have shot this from a darker part into a lighter. It is nicely balanced by the dappled light in the foreground. And the mood is light and everything seems good, blue sky, sunshine. A good place to be. Great color and detail. Very nicely done!! Kindest regards,
Shelly

crckt (7102) 2007-08-06 19:56

Hi Jean,
"Black moods"? from a such an optimistic person like you? Come on..Be happy. Cheer up! Tomorrow I want a "happy mood" picture from you.
;-)
Shaeri

shevchenko (10170) 2007-08-06 20:28

Hi Jean,
Good time to shoot the shadow, a broad river with a big bridge, good pov to show the compositions here.
Ally

nirajsinha (822) 2007-08-06 22:46

HI Jean,

Its always hard to decide which is better your picture or NOTE. This particular commentis exclusively for your note which shows your solitary pain of being ignored or left aside by one of your dear (?). Your note made me feel my lost days...

A great combination of snap and note....

regards

Niraj

Luciano75 (0) 2007-08-06 23:09

Hello Jean
As Niraj said...which is better?...the image or the note?.
Great play of shadows of the palms...
Have a great day,
Salutari,
Lucian
PS:are you reading minds?

jasmis (51257) 2007-08-07 0:56 [Comment]

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sagar (2307) 2007-08-07 8:31

Hi Jean,
Every thing in the shot is superb except probably the black frame.i think lighter colored frame wiould have made it all the more beautiful(I may be entirly wrong though.)
Regards,
Sagarneel.

prumod (8264) 2007-08-07 10:47

hi jean...
nice place with nice greenery and enough shade...
river, bridge and boat defining a typial kerala village...
greetings...

pablominto (41654) 2007-08-07 13:09

Hello Jean Paul,
I like the trunks an diversity of shadows, together they create a strange atmosphere in this beautiful spot by the river!
Well composed, the curving walkway is a nice element!
Greetings,
Pablo -

vinu (129) 2007-08-07 13:32

Shades are so sweet here..so cool..
Really need a walk there.
Good framing.
Well done.
Regards.

go2stones (40) 2007-08-07 19:47

Interesting tropical setting with bright sun and strong shadows. Nice happy looking location.

Well done,
Reid

isabela_sor (42719) 2007-08-08 2:00

These words in your note ....I understand perfectly them.Do you know why?:)Black day?or maybe only a darkish one ....you know better,my dear.This place it is perfect for a walk and you've chose the perfect moment of the day to catch this play of shadows of the palm trees
Ummma

agbonavita (0) 2007-08-08 7:12

Hi my friend,
what happen? The note seems vary sad to me and the shadows on the photo confirm it to me.
If you want talk send me a e-mail.
But if I was you the better thing is walk away, you show here a beautiful place and as isabela said looks a good place for a walk and open our minds.
Cheers
Andre

toto (18775) 2007-08-09 0:42

Belle photo de cet endroit avec ces deux ponts,ces bateaux,ces arbres élancés,jolie vue de ce bel ensemble, beau jeu d' ombres et lumières. Amitiés Thomas
je reviens

brevbrev14 (372) 2007-08-12 6:47