An innocent girl from an Indian village. The moment captured is impossible to forget.
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Deepforest (9260) 2006-12-06 14:19
nice portrait, very expressive face and eyes... very good colours.
Well done. Best regards,
Eridan (427) 2006-12-06 14:31
Great eye contact. Pity, it's not pin sharp.
Karma (993) 2006-12-06 15:39
Well done in captureing such an expression on such a wonderful face.
isabela_sor (47700) 2006-12-06 16:09
A beautiful portrait, not the best from you because something is missing here,maybe more sharpness!But I love her eyes,almost I can see you in... a really wonderful look
scalerman (26900) 2006-12-06 18:40
Vivek Pratap: maybe just a little toooo macro, but I think I know whee you were comming from on this one. It's a soft and engaging portrait. regards, c
Budapestman (82620) 2006-12-06 18:49
This is a very expressive and fine portrait. Its an impressive POV and talkative eyes. Splendid shot, indeed. Thank you, nice days
SCidER (388) 2006-12-06 20:12
the close up adds to the face expression
good macro use although it has became a little bit blurry
thaprem (2554) 2006-12-06 20:22
A very mischievious look indeed...
A bit lacking in sharpness but the eyes pull very powerfully.
A righ choice here.
eversmile (11636) 2006-12-06 20:50
A beautiful portrait with a good light. I like the blurred green background, the clear eyes focused on the camera, the finger close to the chin which seems to be awkward, while, by her look, she seems so sure of herself. Congratulations, Marine.
arnabchat (7233) 2006-12-06 23:55
Vivek, this is a very beautiful portrait, maybe a bit of sharpness could have done it better. TFS, Arnab
izmirli (3987) 2006-12-07 0:11
merhaba my friend vivek
beautiful portrait picture.beautiful lovely little girl.well done
friendly greetings from Istanbul.
aadilj (18102) 2006-12-07 0:13
I am back Dragon Vivek...and back to your amazing work. This moment, those smiling eyes, those silent lips have been composed so well. The lights are just right.
everlasting (14686) 2006-12-07 3:11
A fine portrait, Vivek. I think you can get away with the soft focus here, just. Her thoughtful expression and soulful eyes allow this.
ben4321 (9875) 2006-12-07 4:52
An excellent portrait Vivek.
I like the wet hair and the colourful defocused background, but it's the strong, confident eye contact that has made this shot a success.
I wish that the eyes were a bit sharper though.
You captured a great expression here, and also it seems, something of her personality and spirit; not an easy thing to do.
Angshu (55942) 2006-12-08 4:09
Very nice indeed...softness on the entire picture heightens the mischievous look in her eyes. The croppoing is very effective, but may be a tad sharper? A very good portrait anyway
Philippe (11836) 2006-12-08 10:02
Hi, Vivek. A very good portrait. I like the way the little girl is looking up at you with her beautiful brown eyes. She looks very confident. She stands very well out on the green background thnks to the short DOF.
Scharan (14144) 2006-12-08 21:11
Lindo olhar desta menina Vivek, uma foto muito expressiva, parabéns pelo trabalho.
prezntime (3946) 2006-12-11 22:25
I can't get over this young girls incredible beauty. Your shot has only filled the scene with respect for what a simple bit of eye contact and facial expression can do. I won't dwell on the sharpness thing; for that matter I didn't even notice...the look is so strong it overpowers the nitpicking that can be done to so many photos. Good natural colors and I bet this young one has an amazing personality...it just bleeds from your photograph.
hello_ishan (1571) 2006-12-21 1:24
Excellent shot; I like the expression of her face & her eyes are mischievious. Framing & cropping is perfect. In my view little sharpness would have been an added advantage(may be i am wrong). Thanks for sharing this wonderful image.
- Copyright: Vivek Pratap Singh Sisodia (Dragonheart) (8414)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-11-03
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Camera: Nikon D 200, Sigma AF 17-70mm f/2.8-4.5 DC macro
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Children of India, Faces of India [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-12-06 14:13
- Favorites: 1 [view]