Red Sun Rises Photo

Photographer’s Note

Dialogue from Lord of the Rings, :) .. somehow the sky reminded me the the dialogue of Legolas. Shot taken beside a canal, where we had gone for a morning walk. The day began on a cloudy note, but soon the sky took on different colors.

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somak_g (463) 2008-05-12 21:52

hi vickana,

few problem with the photograph:
* too dark
* horizon tilted
doing a workshop. let me know if you like it.

regards
somak

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JPlumb (3153) 2008-05-12 22:45

Hi Vikana, I like this shot, a lot! I like the mood you have here. The shot is tilted, and I would fix that, but the mood with this early quiet hour of the morning is awesome. If anything, along with the straightening of the tilt, I would enhance this mood. I've prepared a workshop to show you what I mean. I also like the lines here, from behind the bicycle (which is parked perfectly) you have the ridge and path along the canal shooting straight into the centre of your frame. This probably breaks all of the rules, but so what. The two street vendors sitting by the bridge complete the scene. It is expectant. Very nicely done.

Thanks, John

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