A chowmein vendor is selling chowmein outside a municipal school in Delhi. The chowmein is prepared in open and not good for health. But the children are not ready to understand this.
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mirosu (13174) 2014-03-13 3:13
Since you have mentioned that you are beginner in photography, I went through your photographs whch you have posted in TE.
Generally you have a good creative ideas, but a little bit lack of attention to detail. This photo as well as the previous is a good example. Here you have nicely captured the group of small boys in excellent light, but you have cut the faces on the both sides, you have shown the hand without body, these are serious mistakes. In previous photo you have cut the flowers at the bottom and also the boat on the right side.
Do not forget the golden rule of successful photography, before taking photo, make sure that the composition is in proper order. I hope this will help to improve.
p.s. Do not be upset about my comment, may be not what would you expect, but honest.
subhendu_bagchi (25509) 2014-03-13 3:22
sorry to say that you spoiled this frame during post processing. The artificial blurr completely ruined the photograph. I just like the composition with those children, coming to a chowmin stall and eagerly waiting for the cooked product. For this nice daily life scene I like this frame though I think the POV could be more better. Please don't misunderstand my worlds... Play in post processing upto the limit which suits the original capture.
Subhogen (4065) 2014-03-13 6:36
I see you have got hammered over here. :-) and I see that you have taken it sportingly. I like your spirit, a smiley from my side for that.
I agree with Miro's comments but I could not agree more with Subhendu's comments. The artificial blur has been poorly done. It is glaringly apparent and has killed this otherwise nice and cute DL shot. My advice to you would be not to do any PP work but leave your photos as it is for the time being.
That's a lot of advice for you on one single day :-) Keep clicking and sharing. Thanks.
timecapturer (47486) 2014-03-13 11:48
this shot has such a lot of value as an original and fascinating journalistic study. I am not going to dwell on what others have said here, but as I have said in my private e mail to you, this shot is proof of your eye for something unique and despite the background processing is something that is both evocative and compelling. Keep at it Joginder, you have all the talent and just need to hone it. Please don't get discouraged.
PS I love chowmein.
pajaran (50518) 2014-07-16 23:30
Lep pogled i trenutak ...
Dobar trenutak snimka i kontrast, lepo pokazana deca i hrana.
Dobar rad, lepo uhvacen trenutak, lepe boje.
Deca su nase najvece bogatstvo i buducnost.
Imajte lep i uspesan dan, sve najbolje.
Nice view and a second ...
Good time recording and contrast nicely demonstrated children and food.
Good work, nice captured moment, beautiful colors.
Children are our most valuable asset and the future.
Have a nice and successful day, all the best.