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Copyright: Rajeev Moudgil (goodwill) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 187 N: 363] (2681)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Power shot A-420, CANON ZOOMLENS 3.2X 5.4-17.3MM 1:2.8-5.1
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-29 4:32
Viewed: 1300
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 115
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The Rain had almost stopped,
but could not stop
the hubby sitting
behind his wife
to open the umbrella
and ..........
the dog is
always loyal
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I like the framing where the 1/3 rule is perfectly applied. the contrast of the colors is great

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2884 W: 87 N: 4787] (16584)
  • [2006-10-29 4:34]

Excellent funny composition . It is almost as you desaturated the background with th e vivrant colours on the people only. Well seen and well executed.

ahhhh, that is a very good one and a nice effort to this lady to carry her man !
coloured and very well composed with the position of the bike in front of the empty space.
I like it
Jean Michel

This is a sight that you don't often see in India, a man enjoying the ride while the woman does the pedalling.
You captured great expressions on their faces, and composed the shot well. It has a pleasing dynamism, with plenty of space in the frame for the cyclists to move into.
The only thing that lets it down slightly is the massively over-exposed background.
Never mind, I like it.
Cheers,
Ben

It makes me smile ... so it must be good. I like that she is the driver and him sitting behind her. And I really like the yellow of her dress with the yellow umbrella.
Nice scene,
Nino

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3339 W: 303 N: 6363] (27194)
  • [2006-10-29 4:44]

Hi Rajeev!
Nice shot of this couple and dog.They are placed perfect and I like the contrast with the pale background.Your nice photo fits well to Henk`s(oochapan)today`s post and note.
Have a nice sunday,
regards,Leo

Hi Rajeev,
Impressive POV, very nice picture.
Vivid colors and great composition.
Very good work.
I like it. Uğur

Hi Rajeev,
this shot made me smile, it's so lovely :)
I like it very much and the compo is really good.
Nice sunday
Vero

Hello Rajeev,
I really enjoy all your images. I love India and I feel you capture atmospheres, colours and places so well. This is a beautiful one and it really does make me smile, thank you!
Alice

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3191 W: 96 N: 1629] (14563)
  • [2006-10-29 6:27]

Classically composed. Offcenter with plenty of empty space, you have motion into a frame instead of out of it, the line draws my eye across the frame. Too bad the dog isnt better seperated from the couple, that was a bit of bad luck. Otherwise quite good stuff.

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer [C: 221 W: 3 N: 2] (3181)
  • [2006-10-29 6:27]

Hi Rajeev ;)
wonderful composition... nice colors and atmosphere... TFS
All the best,
J ;)

Agreed!Rafal says all in his comment!
But...
A nice Sunday

Interesting shot, i like the brightness of the colours in an otherwise drab scene, and your placement of the bike at far left is good.

A very nice compo, Rajeev spoiled a tiny bit by oversaturation of the colors (RED and YELLOW!) If those were toned down a notch or two this would be perfect.
Cheers,
Farncis

Raeev,
A fine composition!...
The smiling face of the strong lady is mesmerising...
Well done
Could have liked a monochrome on this.
Cheers,
Prem

hello brother,

What to tell about this pic...??? can u suggest me..?? please can u suggest me..?? what do u think of it yrself..???

I would call it the confluence of three minds..The man sitting behind,the wife riding the cycle and you.

"I am taking my husband home
I am happy that i am not alone
I have some one who believes in me
and gives me the liberty to take his responsibility
and i thank you my dear friend
for recognising this trend
India is rising
Indian woman is rising..!!!"

THATS WHAT THIS WOMAN IS TELLING YOU...

GREAT GREAT SHOT..!!!!! CANT EXPLAIN THE DEPTH OF THIS PIC BEING AN INDIAN...THANKS FOR THIS BRO

INDRO

Hi Rajeev!
This is a very kind and expressive photo! Details are fascinating and effective. Its an excellent composition and superb timing. This is a splendid mood and very good theme.
Thank you, nice days
George

Hi Rajeev,
Great compo.Gives us always a feeling of motion with a lot of vacant space to the right.Im not quite sure about the placing of that dog though...but it was all what u got.Great lively shot.
TFS,
Dhurjati

Merhaba Rajeev,
Very beautiful daily life scene.Composition. light and colours are impressive.Best wishes.

hAyAti

Dear, dear brother...

I've obviously been away too long, and it's just been a day or two. This is genius, one of the finest works you've put forth. The composition is amazing as the couple come pedaling into the frame with the dog bowing down behind to mark the royal passage. The colors are incredible with the umbrella such a unique touch. But...but, the smiles, I immediately felt shot through with good feelings and happiness. A perfect contrast to the title and face of your previous post; which I haven't had a chance to comment on as of yet.
brother, to my favorites.
Your friend, you've made my day.
Chris.

Hello Rajeev,
Such exquisite framing. I love it. Viewing this photo puts a smile on my face. Good work my friend. Danilo

Hello,
simply perfect shot of the couple.
Oh! what a cheerful expressions...after a long time I enjoyed from a shot so much...our country our INDIA is even beautiful through your shot...very very well done bhaiya...also the colour composition is just wonderful.
regards,
Mishreyee
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Hi Rajeev,
Nice shot of the couple.You have captured a typical Indian scene.I don't know why but this shot reminds me the song :- JO DUKH SE GHABRA JAYE WOH NAHIN HIND KI NARI (film Jai Santoshi Maa).The colour of the saree and umberlla is creating magic to the shot.Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Hitesh.

hi rajeev,

very funny pov of the scene. framing is good. also good is the colours. focus is very sharp as well. well done and tfs.

regards,
arjun

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  • sayan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 75 N: 692] (2601)
  • [2006-10-30 6:38]

Rajeev ji,

This is awesome. Beautiful placement of the subject in the frame, nice colour contrast and good dynamism. The background is a bit overexposed though.
Regards
sayan

Nice compo you did here and touching scene, the woman as a driver, unusual.
A little bit oversatured, I think it would work too in BW.
Thanks for your comment.
Regards

Joel

Ha ha ha it is humors shot dear dog and hubby ha ha ha nice comparison dear well composed placing your subject in extreme corner and showing the empty frame before it good technique dear.

oh, this is lovely, Rejeev!
colorful, composition is just perfect and the fact the woman is carrying the man makes the image extra cute!
adorable!

Bélissima meu amigo! Very pretty my Friend!

The colors here are suberb contrasting very weel with the white sky. Nice momment you got, freezing very well the couple on the bike.

Love it!
Thanks
Andre

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  • teutza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1035 W: 222 N: 1824] (9657)
  • [2006-10-30 15:23]

ollaaa my dear friend!!
this composition worth 10000 points!!!
i love the composition!!everything is amasing!!the 2 people are so funny:)
you had a great eye!!!!
a 10000 hugs:)
teo

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  • Luan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2009 W: 243 N: 1883] (15805)
  • [2006-10-30 16:28]

Hello Rajeev
It's good, but I think the sky is to white it makes the picture difficult to look at. However the framing is perfect, I like those 2 persons on the bike.
Luan

Ola Rajeev , fantastica foto , belas cores adorei!!!
Um abraço Gonçalo

Hello Rajeev,
Very very interesting composition and excellent POV. The most amazing are the expression on the faces of the couples. I can feel the domination of the female over the male:-)
Very well done
Bet regards
Vivek

Hi Rajeev

Very nice composition and excellent POV. The vivid colours and expression of this couple really make your picture special and attractive!

Well seen and very well done!

Thanks for sharing

Tony

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  • Wanda1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 10 N: 1262] (6861)
  • [2006-11-01 12:56]

Hi Rajeev,
This is a wonderful eye catching shot. The composition is great and the colours are striking. The expressions on their faces are lovely and the dog just adds that extra bit. The frame works really well too. Well captured!
Regards
Wanda

Hi Rajeev
Good capure of these two people on a bike. The composition is well structured and the rainy atmosphere seems to add greatly to the overall feeling of the picture. Very good work.
Aubrey

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  • hoorge Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 320 W: 11 N: 179] (1430)
  • [2006-11-01 22:50]

Rajeev,

I like how you framed this shot and how you left a lot of room to the front of the subjects. Good rules of third technique, great composition and pov. I feel the picture is a little too bright but it is still a good daily life capture.

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4446 W: 149 N: 6652] (21770)
  • [2006-11-02 7:11]

Hello Rajeev
As a photograph, excellent, As a mood that it portrays - excellent. Technical aspects apart this is a gem of a shot. Love the placement of the subject in strong colours..pity about the dog's position..a little further off would have been great..but nothing you could do about that!
Regards
Angshuman
PS : Wondering about the people..they do look from the parts of India where I stay!

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1482 W: 84 N: 1282] (12316)
  • [2006-11-04 0:54]

Ha, ha......
Great shot. Full of life and dynamism. The lady and her companion really love the ride as well as your photography. The more visibility of the dog surely gives a very good perspective.
Well done.
Partha

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  • zeca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2536 W: 162 N: 3402] (14670)
  • [2006-11-04 17:41]

Hello Rajeev!
Nice framing!! The colours are also great in this extra saturated presentation! Excellent timing!
Cheers!
Zeca

HI Rajeev:

This is a perfect shot. The subject is placed at the right and suitable angle. The bikers look so colorful. ALthough the background is a little over exposed, but it is pleasant in this situation. Good work Rajeev. Sothy

Excellent compo and colours. Those colourful costumes are amazing ! Nice and funny photo. I like that yellow umbrella.
TFS,

Andreea

There is perepective and strong colours. Something to be learned from this photograph.
A very good image.
MS

Rajeev ji,
A great shot, tribute to their love.

It would be even more better if the lady had a sun-glasses on her face. :-)

Regards
Vijayabaskar.

wonderful shot,hope i can give u 20 points!!!!...best wishes..subir

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  • ryno Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 726 W: 0 N: 186] (3335)
  • [2006-11-21 5:21]

Hi Rajeev, this is a lovely, amusing shot. The fact that she is cycling with him the passenger makes it even funnier. Her sari provides a great splash of colour on a drab day. well seen and captured! Regards,
Ryno

Hi Rajeev,

Fantastic capture, great color and a perfect 10 for PoV.
My appreciations.
HIRAK

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  • daddo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1531 W: 29 N: 1476] (6907)
  • [2006-11-25 18:36]

Namaste Rajeev. A joyful picture in terms of colour and personalities.great idea to place them at the edge so that the road becomes also something to be noticed. In a sense it becomes the silvery grey background on which these brightly clad people become the stars. Well done. Regards. Klaudio.

Rajeev: when you have it you have it. This is a splendid image with sharpness of top notch quality. regards, c

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  • t0mmm1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 953 W: 15 N: 815] (5426)
  • [2006-12-07 15:44]

WOWOWOWWOOW!!! What a wonderful picture! Wonderful composition and excellent use of empty space. I like it very much!
Have a nice day,
Tomi

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3342 W: 343 N: 4011] (25681)
  • [2006-12-15 9:54]

hello Rajeev, very good composition here with this bicycle 1/3 of the shot... bravo i don't think often at this photo law...i like' how you had desatured the road! bravo
i come back from my mission in Yakoutia via Romania with Isabela, your friend
take care
francine

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  • Moshu (25)
  • [2006-12-30 11:43]

This picture makes me lough, because SHE is the bike driver. Whoever is the driver at theirs home ?
Very nice colours and contrast. Maybe the subject some mm at right...(rule of thirds) Please no offense.
Regards,
Cristian

hi rajeev,
very beautiful composition using the rules of third.
i was wondering why the husband wasn't on the wheels instead?
the picture is clear and well detailed. the loyal dog is a bonus to the compo and presentation.
benedict

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Hello Rajeev, perhaps this is one of the best compositions that he has seen lately and, although the horizon is a little unbalanced, it is a magnificent photo.

Congratulations my friend.

Regards from Spain.

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Hi Rajeev!!
Gosto das cores, mas principalmente do enquadramento que torna a imagem muito dinamica.
Good work.
Friend.
aznegrao.

Hi Rajeev,
Wonderful this picture! pretty composition of the bisycle with the wife driver, good and light colours! Very good job. Thank you for your photo.Bravo Giorgios

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  • KKar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 0 N: 69] (444)
  • [2007-08-10 0:37]

Hi Rajeev
Nice composition (a bit unfortunate about the dog though. Colors are good but the contrast is a bit too high. I believe that was the intention
Well done
kostas

One image i could not resist to comment upon...


lovely ...

regards

I just saw this pic and even though everything else is great..the subject and the mood is so sweet..for the lack of a better word..cant focus on anything else.
Congrats on the shot
Regards
Preetie

Excellent composition of this interesting daily life scene. The bright colours of the foreground subjects contrast sharply with the hazy background.
Congratulations Rajeev!

Thành.

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