A group discussion after retirement of work in a river bank.
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subhaadhya (193) 2010-07-15 9:50
The picture is nice with a gentle B/W tone.....but the crop should be more proper.the right side element distracts....and the picture can be taken a little bit close to capture the feet of the man large....
samratrayc (438) 2010-07-17 19:53
Nice DOF n warm tones by shooting this in BW, though i would have wanted to know the details of the post. Ur attempt is appreciable but personally i think that there is quite some negative space on the top right.
Besides it wud have done better justice to the shot had u brought the feet, sandals and just the stairs more into focus rather than including so many other elements .. they act as a clutter in my eyes.
But nice attempt overall
rikko77 (10849) 2010-08-26 4:15
among your latest posts, I choose this one: great attention to details and attentive composition. Pity for that black stuff on the bottom right, but the overall pic is really good.
Have a good day