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Photographer’s Note

HELLO EVERYONE!!

En Francis,
Désolé pour signaler un peu tard après un long temps... Je suis vraiment devenu occupé avec la vie... Je ne signalerai pas très souvent comme plus tôt puisqu'il y a trop et je n'obtiens pas n'importe quand de m'asseoir sur le PC. Espérez que vous des types comprenez...

C'était mon premier jour dans Puri.. La plage était très crowdy et il y avait tant de personnes dans la plage. Chacun était dans quelque chose. Certains se sont reposés dans le restaurant de plage avec leurs livres tandis que les autres appréciaient le bain du soleil. Il y avait les personnes locales trop qui célébraient Holi ce jour. Son un festival de couleurs, un de les plus spéciales en Inde. Certains détendaient également en tant que ces deux, appréciant le charme chaud de mer et la mer elle-même était un grand compagnon...

Je sais les problèmes avec l'horizon qui est tout d'abord incliné. J'obtiens également beaucoup se plaint à son sujet. Oui, j'ai essayé de fixer ceci est chiffre de didnt de picoseconde, mais de I tout à fait il hors de... Svp, les ateliers sont bienvenus...

J'ai exprès maintenu dans le mode de B/W et ai cultivé le ciel supplémentaire ainsi faites-lui un type de pano et il peut également convenir à ma composition...

Écrivez svp au sujet de mes idées cette fois ! ! Attente généreusement vos critiques.

IN ENGLISH,
Sorry for posting a bit late after a long time... I really got busy with life ... I wont be posting very often like earlier since there is too much and i am not getting any time to sit on the PC. Hope you guys understand...

This was my first day in Puri.. The beach was very crowdy and there were so many people in the beach.. Everyone was into something.. Some rested in the beach restaurant with their books while some were enjoying sun bath .. There were local people too who were celebrating Holi on that day.. Its a festival of colors ,one of the most special ones in India.. Some were also relaxing as these two , enjoying the warm sea charm and the sea itself was a great companion...

I know about the problems with horizon which is very much tilted .. I am also getting many complains about it.. Yes, i tried to fix this is PS , but i didnt quite figure it out ... Please, workshops are welcome ...
I purposely kept in B/W mode and cropped the extra sky so make it a pano type and it may also suit my composition ...
Please write about my ideas this time!! Waiting generously for your critiques ..

fabio_ts, swiatopelk777, sagar, Cricri, robob, crckt has marked this note useful

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fabio_ts (13674) 2008-04-30 5:29

Smartly cropped and tastefully framed picturesayan, really a fine work, compliments!!

have a nice day,
Fabio.

swiatopelk777 (9308) 2008-04-30 5:30

Hi Sayan!
Relax, don't do it!
Amazing scene.
Godo shot.
Very funny effect.
Cheers!

rajiv_077 (1355) 2008-04-30 5:36

Hi Sayan

Very interesting shot, nice POV and composition. This type of places is really for relax. B & W mode looks good, This picture looks little tilt from one side.

kind regards

rajiv

sagar (2307) 2008-04-30 7:02

Hi Sayan,
Good shot, but as you mentioned, the horizon is largely tilted. There's also a problem with noise I think.
The POV, however is magical. The framing of the people gazing to the sea, works well here.
Regards,
Sagarneel.
PS- Belated birthday wishes!!!

Cricri (43762) 2008-04-30 8:14

Hi Sayan,
J'aime ce côté calme et relaxant dans cette composition, les personnes ajoute ce moment plaisant, a part comme tu le dit dans ta note le tilt de l'horizon, j'aime cette image fait en N/B
Merçi pour ton passage
Passe une trés belle fin d'aprés midi et beaucoup d'amussement les jours avenir
cricri
ps) trés jolie ta photo intro

robob (3640) 2008-04-30 9:11

Hello Sayan,
J’aime beaucoup le format que tu as choisi pour cette photo ainsi que la position de ces deux garçons dans ton cadrage,
Bon choix du B&W,
Bien à toi,
Robert

Longroute (9865) 2008-04-30 9:36

Not bad, my friend, not bad...
But the tilted horizon... was it a free choice of yours?
Bon fin de samaine,
Donato

japiey (9521) 2008-04-30 11:06

Hello Sayan,

I wish you the best, my good friend.
Personal thoughts about the technical dramas always feels in me that there's no need to make perfect an image in technical aspects always... but go for the aesthetic expressions that can be shown through the frame..
I love that side always.. let there be light, grains, tilts.. and all.. but there has to be a concept too... that's important... and that's what we show to the world... and the world sees US through it.
ENJOY FILMING...
All my wishes.

jp

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bapun1 (803) 2008-04-30 12:29

Hi sayan,
I loved every single posting of yours. And Puri is a common nostalgic link.

As the horizon was bothering you, I tried to fix it. But then the original always helps to attain the max.

Pls have a look at the WS and let me know good,bad ugly whatever it is.

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trekks (14334) 2008-04-30 22:28

hello Sayan

Although some may not give horizon its importance, it is a good part of practice to keep the sea or lake shoreline level. When the technical aspect of a photo is not importantly considered in a shooting, it has a large discount effect. A flaw is not serious if you can fix it easily by pp work, especially horizon is very normal. The WS clearly shows how serious is this flaw and unable to be fixed.

I tried my best to do a workshop by correcting the tilt and cloning out the distractions at border. Hope that it helps.

That aside, the beach scene has good pov and B&W tone.

tfs, bill

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tehanu_f (6874) 2008-05-01 3:43

This could have been a great shot but for the wonky horizon. If you use "rotate canvas" choice on photoshop, you can correct it easily. I had a look at your gallery and saw many good photos, but I think you also have a noise problem in some of them (eg. I'll be there forever and dreamy creamy). You can download neat image from the internet and eliminate the noise easily.
regards,
fusun

crckt (7100) 2008-05-06 17:54

Hi Sayan,
Your shots have improved dramatically, especially the way you present them. Good B/W shot, with nice quality and composition.
Well done,
Shaeri

Stepan (27175) 2008-06-25 22:01

A strange image, with the straight people and the tilted skyline. Makes it troubling, makes it unusual... And that's what I appreciate here. And the cool mood too. Interesting inspiration.
Stéphane