Chandipur Sea Beach. Daily Life in around sea.
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polpo56 (15136) 2011-03-25 1:35
welcome on TE.
I like this picture: Point Of View, composition and reflections on the water are very nice.
My best compliments.
yquem46 (38752) 2011-03-25 1:40
Orissa, a part of India that I do not know but I will some day
Welcome to TE with this nice one
I like the low POV that you've taken, with the close up of the wet sand at the FG and the 3 characters with the net standing out on the cloudy sky
Just a little problem easy to address: straighten the horizon line
tyro (26142) 2011-03-25 3:12
I love this photograph! But I think it could be a little better. I love the picture of daily life with this family tending their nets but, to me, it looks a little dark.
I've done a very quick workshop for you (and I hope you will not be offended). Firstly, I thought that the horizon wasn't quite straight and I've tried to correct that. Anyway, Sintu, have a little look at my workshop and see what you think - I hope I haven't ruined this picture for you!
P.S. Welcome to TrekEarth! I hope you enjoy this site as much as I have over the past four years - I have certainly learned a lot and made a few good friends too!
krzychu30 (15512) 2011-03-25 4:52
Welcome to TE!
what a beautiful composition.You´ve captured this scene perfectly.I like the low POV you´ve chosen here.Superb colors and great light management.A little bit subdued color tones and light gives nice effect and create unique atmosphere of this scene.
My Best Regards
SnapRJW (31629) 2011-03-25 5:24
Hello Again Sintu - A very good POV which allows you to include the wet rippled sand in the shot. Lovely colour but maybe a tad dark, I've looked at John's WS and feel somewhere between the 2 would be good. I look forward to seeing more of your interesting work. Best regards Rosemary
annjackman (21901) 2011-03-25 7:48
A really excellent composition with the one person in the foreground and the two further back. I think John's WS is helpful as it brightens it a little.
Congratulations on seeing such a wonderful picture - you have a very good eye for a photograph. Welcome to TE. Regards, Ann
oss (425) 2011-03-25 11:52
What an entry.
Great framing although i would have cropped some of the sky. The position of the subjects is fantastic.
paromitadey (623) 2011-04-03 22:34
This is a beautiful composition :)
Nice low perspective, reflections on water and positioning of the figures.
Though I agree with others about the tilted horizon and the figures are a tad dark but I too feel same with Rosemary as I would also prefer the picture to be in between the WS done by John and the original.