A shot from the busy market area of Dali
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Wandering_Dan (3449) 2007-08-27 9:00
A good character and action shot, but you've clipped the top of her hat. Also the whites are too strong; can you tone them down a bit, perhaps with Levels?
tsti003 (285) 2007-08-27 22:13
Hi Steve Saba
I really like this shot. I feel like the woman is really trying to sell me that apple. You have captured her perfectly with this side-lit shot. This shot is alive
I don't agree with Wandering Dan though. clipping off the top of her hat has enhanced the shot not weakened it. It stops the viewers eye moving off the subject. And your whites are as natural as I would expect them to be.
The only minor problem I have here are the two distracting bright objects, the person on blue jeans on the top right and that piece of white garbage on the center left, which could easily removed with PhotoShop.