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sam (897) 2002-10-15 19:53
Nice shot. The moment you captured is just right. Authentic. Might want to crop a little tighter, and even consider a horizontal composition. Definitely would take out the black/white tile and steel shutter on left. Takes away from the timeless quality and muted tones of rest of image.
efatapo (185) 2002-10-17 17:43
While I like the lines in this picture and have looked at it a number of times, I just can't pull myself away from thinking she's on the crapper. Besides that I think it's a great shot. :) I just can't get over that. So, a :) for Composition but a :\ for Content
CedarBough (74) 2003-03-24 8:22
i really like shots like this where you really feel it was a candid... i think that the only real improvement here would be to crop from the bottom, it'd help get the woman out of the center. love those muted colors.
amy (40) 2003-04-12 1:59
Excellent composition, love the color!
ronin (14) 2004-01-24 21:00
excellent candid... good colours. nice viewpoint.
elena (1054) 2004-05-08 0:05
hehe i like this one! and i can imagine the situation, you are walking, you notice her, you tell yourself, i need to get this pic, you get ready and shoot before she had time to realize there was a camera pointing at her....
the colors are very harmonious, those oldish green, dark red and pale yellow... and she is just fabulous: her pose, her hand, her foot, her dropped lenses... the light is just right. minor crop on the left is needed...
willy (463) 2005-06-13 12:24
This photo seems to say a lot about the place and the life of this person, color tones and angle also very well captured.
MirellaHuisman (18) 2006-01-17 13:43
I like this picture. just somone in there dayly live. great!!
- Copyright: Adam Silverman (adam) (860)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2000-08-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Travelogue: China Backpacking
- Theme(s): Readers [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2002-10-05 1:11
- Favorites: 1 [view]