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sam (897) 2002-10-18 13:39
The focus of interest in this photo is definitely the hat, head, hands and money, which you have captured very well. I'm a little distracted by the sideways legs and clutter at the bottom of the frame. I would crop this image just below the hands, making it almost a square composition that focuses on the key elements.
Nina (4965) 2002-10-20 17:57
I think it is a good shot, but agree with Sam's view that a crop at the bottom would improve it.
Jani7za (0) 2003-10-02 8:12
yes, nice interesint shot. Crop just above the knees would be great, the clutter distracts.
iamxa (3025) 2003-10-24 8:25
Very nice urban portrait. I agree whith Nina and Sam, needs a bit at the bottom, and I think it needs more contrast.
I was seeing your photos and I travel around the wold. Thanks for it.
clodreno (0) 2003-11-04 2:24
Nice shot, good in black and white. I do remember a super rainy day and snowy day, 2 years ago, in Kaili,
This is nice. If I was good enough with PS I would crop The pole on the right of the pic.
MiguelP (14466) 2004-08-26 16:46
The fact that we are not able to see futher behing the hat give to your picture a misterious touch that I really like. The compositions is rather good. Congratulations from Madrid.
gantzt (484) 2005-10-07 19:29
Very nice composition and use of B&W
yanseiler (20) 2006-05-06 5:57
Nice composition, cool to see just a piece of his face under the hat. A bit more of contrast would be cool. You should consider allowing workshops, it is interesting to see how others would post the same picture (doesn't mean that this is better of course).
- Copyright: Adam Silverman (adam) (860)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2000-08-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon A2
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Travelogue: China Backpacking
- Theme(s): The best TrekEarth Black & White... [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2002-10-18 3:15
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