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(821) 2009-03-08 1:19
Hi Phil. I think you have a good idea here, but the subjects are too far away for the viewer to get an idea about what they are doing etc. I think you could improve the pic, simply by getting closer to the "door".
Skirmante
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(65) 2009-03-08 6:57
Good framing but thought picture would be better just with a child and closer view because other man too faraway.
Best regards,Skirmante.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Phil Benusa (travelingbenusa) (41)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-05-01
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-03-08 1:15
Viewed: 672
Points: 4
