light-shade on the rooftop

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• patshoo (890)
• [2008-06-16 7:24]

Attractive architectural scene,Nice POV to use shadow of the sun screen as lead line to subject,Lady on the bench made this a lively photo,Contrast of geometric line and natural form also made interesting story.Good work,TFS.

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• KLB (7783)
• [2008-06-16 10:16]

Hello Flavia

Very interesting composition. You've done a great use of light and shades to make a graphic shot and gives depth to the picture.
The lonely woman add life in this empty space and is welcome to imagine a story about her presence.
Very good job, with a very good quality, and a fine sharpness.
Well done.
I also like your WS, maybe even more thanks to the excellent framing and the effective play of crossing lines. I can't choose !

Regards,
Karine

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• geester (340)
• [2008-06-16 11:07]

Hi Flavia,

Lines lines and more lines. I liek lines:-)) Well composed.

Graeme

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• jonathan_hart (15392)
• [2008-06-16 12:52]
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superbe potentiel de l'endroit, ici comme la version WS, c'est très intéressant
en WS juste une idée recadrage
amicalement
jo

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• belido (9595)
• [2008-06-17 4:27]

Olá Flavia,

belíssima perspectiva assim como eficiente controle de luz e sombra. Os detalhes estão lá, mesmo sobre as áreas escurecidas. A adição humana foi essencial à composição. Ótimo trabalho!
Abraço,
Carlos

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• placombe (6970)
• [2008-06-17 15:31]

Bonjour Flavia
Les ombres au sol et leur parallélisme avec le toit augmente l'effet de profondeur. Bien vu.
Pierre

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• zeca (18032)
• [2008-06-17 18:12]

Ótimo trabalho, Flávia. A exposição foi adequada, captando belo grafismo nas sombras e toda a atmosphére do local, extremamente nítido e agradável.
Abraço,
Zeca

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• jmdias (8843)
• [2008-06-20 17:27]

flávia

lindo conjunto de linhas e formas, as sombras replicam as linhas e a personagem está bem posicionada, sendo que as plantas quebram a frieza do ambiente
bela compo
abraços

jorge

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• pablominto (30219)
• [2008-06-30 3:11]

Hello Flavia,

I can understand why you were fascinated by those lines!
Not only is there a real version but the shadows add even more impact...
Well framed scene with an awesome feeling of depth, inclusion of the lady takes care of the human factor!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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• Stepan (26165)
• [2008-07-14 23:36]

An excellent light management to have a fresh sensation, a cool atmosphere. The place looks peaceful and it was a good idea to have someone in to produce some humanity. Well done.
Stéphane

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• archimatica (7069)
• [2008-07-16 13:36]

Hi, Flavia!
Attractive architectural scene, I like the lights and the composition.
Regards
Renzo

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• claudeD (6801)
• [2008-08-06 8:58]

Hello Flavia,

I like this graphical shot very much.Fine comnposition and excellent light managment.Very well done.

With regards from Luxembourg

Jean-Claude