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Copyright: lamp zhang (lamp) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 4] (137)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-24
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-06-19 8:40
Viewed: 424
Points: 10
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North Mausoleum has many fantastic trees, all is in an atmosphere of dreariness and quietness. an mysterious force is aroud me in this big mausoleum of Qing Taizong Huangtaiji.

your suggestions will be very appreciated.

thank u!

lamp

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Nice warm greens and browns against a clear blue sky. And the horse stands patiently. Nice composition.

Love the colors. The tree with its supported branches could be a photo by itself. The horse as a closeup might possibly be a photo by itself if it wasn't "standing" on the bottom edge of the photo. The mausoleum is mostly hidden by the tree, but could be a photo by itself. Together, it's just a snapshot. There's too much tilt and vertical perspective on the mausoleum, too much of the tree on the right. Can you allow workshop? I'd like to modify it a bit.

Hello Lamp, the first thing thanks for your critique, since I have realized that it is the first one that you have done on the page, I have to say to you that the beginning are not easy, but do not lose hope for it, you will realize of that one of the best and entertaining pages of photography.
I like but am your photography a little low of definition observing what the others do you will be learning more things and what you should not know or doubt ask about it.
biemvenido to YOU
a greeting friend
regards.
PD, hoped that all this that I say to you should not bother you, I do it with good intention and only for if I can help you.

hello Lamp
tks for critiques welcome on trek earth i add you to my favorites list for encouraged you in the way of growing up in photographies making
congratulations form Belgium Liège-Seraing
Henri " see you soon... bye "

Hi Lamp,
Beautiful landscape and an interesting tree. Nice composition and very nice green colors.
Thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Rossy

Hi Lamp
Nice composition and nice place. Very good shot, super colors and fantastic landscape like something out. Excellent
Regards Robert

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4922 W: 169 N: 7559] (24684)
  • [2007-06-25 23:48]

Hello Lamp
A busy photo if I may say..the colours are good. However there are too many good things to see. I would presume standing a bit to the right to keep the horse closer & the Mausoleum on the left would have been interesting. This place has a good potential for a good photograph..just try to experiment a bit with POVs, you would come up trumps in no time.
With Regards
Angshu

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