apples on sticks

Critiques [Translate]

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• sam (897)
• [2002-11-25 20:03]

This image has a good clean composition, with an uncluttered profile of the man with his wares, and a pleasing, uncluttered background (except for the thin shadow). I particularly like the man's body language, with his hand clutching the cigarette, and his face very expressive, despite the shadow cast by his fedora. It took good timing to get an engaging pose in combination with a clean backdrop. My only complaint is the harshness of the light and the fact that his fingertip is cropped. You might consider cropping about 10% off the top.

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• etiennejr (1002)
• [2004-05-04 22:16]

Nog een mooie plaat koen. Heb je ze ook geprobeerd, de vruchten komen uit de bergen en zijn erg zuur, maar de caramel smaakt prima.