I lost one shoe Photo

Photographer’s Note

I saw this young girl walking in Qingdao; when she lost a shoe...she simply sit down and wear it again but she look more a young lady than a young children. I felt all the scene nice and the girl so cute..

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Bartleby (4812) 2008-11-23 2:08

Hi Lily,
you captured a funny attitude with this little girl. She looks very focused on what she's doing. Those staire provide a good neutral background. I like that portrait.

Yours,

Philippe

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chriswhitley (1456) 2008-11-23 9:00

Hi Lily. A nice portrait of this little girl. She looks as if she concentrating very hard on putting her shoe back on. Look forward to seeing more of your shots. Chris

trabuio (1597) 2008-11-23 9:02

Hi Lily,

the girl is nice so focused on her shoe, but the picture don't show any environment. I think a use of a more wide lens can show us something more than a girl (even a nice girl).

KevRyan (22350) 2008-11-23 13:44

A really beautiful capture of the intensity and (often humorous) concentration of a young child Lily - I like this a lot and really from my point of view I think the focus on the child alone is fine in itself - however as 'trabuio' pointed out there is another picture where she could be seen doing this in a wider context - but it will really have a different message.

best wishes Kev

vmukherjee (395) 2008-12-02 23:21

Nice shot. You have captured a very cute moment.

clio (22556) 2008-12-02 23:44

Bonjour Lily,
Very beautiful portrait full of sensibility. I like the look so concentrated of this girl. It is really complicated to put this shoe back!
The red clothes is very beautiful on this grey bottom.
I am happy to discover your new gallery.
Welcome and have a lot of fun on TE!
Diane

mvdisco (11466) 2008-12-03 7:22

Hi Lily,
Wanderful action catch of this young girl,
Very cute scene and well taken picture,
Excellent POV. and détails.
Excellent Portrait of this young little girl..
well done.
Michel

josepmarin (33785) 2008-12-05 10:59

Hi Lily,
First, welcome to this site of passionate people about the photography and about the world.
Your photo is beautiful, nice and attractive, in a perfect capture for a good portrait of this little girl who seems to have a problem with her shoe.
I like the freshness and spontaneity of the scene, very well caught in your composition.
Well done.
Best regards,
Josep

I_WanderingSoul (652) 2008-12-15 1:55

Oh how cute Lily!
Wonderful moment you have captured.
ha ha.. yea..maybe she is more of a lady than a child.
Her focus on her shoe makes the scene all the more interesting.
Well shot.
TFS,Neelima.