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Take in a cloudy day near a park
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sabyasachi1212
(19542) 2006-05-27 23:46
Hi David,
Excellent composition, signifies a very relaxed atmosphere. I like the way she is looking up at something with a hint of smile.
Was she aware that you were shooting her? Seems a natural.
Thanks for sharing and welcome to TE.
Sabyasachi
ryno
(4590) 2006-05-27 23:52
Lovely photo, David. She looks very calm & serene and even though it's obviously a posed photo, it does have a natural quality about it. Nice one!
dsidwell
(9745) 2006-05-28 0:01
This is a lovely portrait, David. I love the light, composition and framing. Welcome to TE!
partha
(13657) 2006-05-28 0:28
Very romanic atmosphere.The colour tone is suparb and the DOF is controlled so well.
partha
s10001in
(1485) 2006-05-28 0:38
David,
Welcome to TE.
Great Pic to start with.
Very plesent atmosphere. Beautiful girl looking deep in the sky.
Great shot.
very well done.
TFS, Shailendra
PeterDF
(292) 2006-05-28 1:13
I don't usually comment too often on posed shots on TE...but this one really stands out...I must say. The way you've got her focused in between the strands of grass in front and behind, is really quite beautiful. It's a unique shot and nicely done!
david
(3972) 2006-05-28 1:16
hi david
welcome to trek earth.
this is a fabulous first shot. i really like the grass in the foreground that breaks the shot up, but still lets us enjoy your beautiful subject.
i think your framing is spot on. you've got some space in front for her to look into, but not too much. the positioning is good.
well done ... i'm looking forward to seeing your next post! ;)
orme
(6746) 2006-05-28 2:04
Welcome to Trek Earth, David.
This is a wonderful portrait shot, with an excellent DOF. I especially like the look of wonderment that you captured in the girl's face. Well done. Nice web site too.
yesterday
(9787) 2006-05-28 3:21 [Comment]
Framboisilla
(5402) 2006-05-28 5:20
Hello David,
Beautiful shot, I like the woman's attitude, her body in the long grass... I've just tried a workshop to put it in B&W.
Regards,
Stéphanie.
Andre-H
(1407) 2006-05-30 2:47
Wonderful and very curvaceous. The composition is effective and interesting, and brings out the woman's forms, and the smile on her face, and her moon-shaped eyes adds to the charm of this picture. Well done!
André
derric
(100) 2006-09-07 21:19
Hi David
This is a nice photo, the compsition is very good, and DOF,is also well controlled, keep up the good work.
cepekdong
(3668) 2006-09-15 8:59
excellent capture of a beautiful girl. the grass gives a great contrast to the sharp object in the center, and although the colours of her skin and the grass quite ressemble each other she can be very well seen !
pinakie_slg
(835) 2007-10-29 5:12
Excellent composition. i dont know how you got this shot. simply terrible.
welcome to T E.
Paul65
(1402) 2007-10-29 5:49
Hi David!
This is a lovely portrait. Beautiful girl who have nature smile. Excellent compoced. The light and contrast and color is good in this photo.
Congratulations!
Greetings from Poland.
tomi1
(1226) 2008-10-20 13:20
Oeiras,20-10-2008
David Clayton
Very expressive happy moment of this young lady contacting the wild pure nature. Best regards. Domingos
coco
(27754) 2009-06-21 15:53
Hi David.
Technically a beautiful portrait.
Your skills and taste are wonderful.
Well done.
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