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A street on the alert


A street on the alert
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Copyright: Philippe BUFFARD (cobraphil8) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1753 W: 979 N: 1891] (11452)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS 30, Canon EF 35mm f/2.0, Fuji Provia 100F
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Theme(s): Mes coups de coeur :) / Choice of the heart [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-02-23 3:34
Viewed: 1164
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Here a shot that I reposte after having taken the advice of Daniel and then also all my training through your criticisms on postprocessing.
I hope that between the two versions you will like the difference.

Street of Phnom Penh taken towards 7h of the morning, where in France one just starts to stretch bed. Here all starts earlier, one lives with the sun.

Salesmen pass in the streets to sell their products.

And then this street is also that where I ravelled during my marriage to go to ask for the hand of my wife. A great moment for me...

In a friendly way

Philippe
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Hello Philippe,

to be honest the original version is better. Not too much difference between the versions.
Very good capture and composition.

Congrats,

Sarhan.

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2006-02-23 3:51]

Good work, a big improvement over the original. Crisper colors, better details. The composition is as good as that one but thanks to the pp work the photo comes to life.

Salut Philippe
C'est clair que c'est ... plus clair. La deuxième version est la bonne. Cette scène est paisible, mais on y sent aussi la vie et le travail.
C'est une belle perspective.
Bien vu
Bertrand

Salut Philippe,
Alors, tu as fait du bon travail sur cette photo... la difference apres le PP est grande!
je trouve aussi la composition tres interessante, comme nous ammene l'ambiance de ce coin du monde...
A+
cherubin

salut philippe
bon travail de retouche des couleurs, une vue d'une rue bien typique de phnom penh, peut être un peu de netteté aurait été bien.
amitiés
gilbert

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  • Flavia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1759 W: 99 N: 1909] (7990)
  • [2006-02-24 16:38]

Salut Phillippe,

Very good work on the post processing. All the beaty f the shot appeared in this version. Il like the flower and the coconut chart, but also the perspective of this allew with all the live it contains.

Best Regards,

Flavia

Hi Philippe,

Interesting daily life picture. There was little difference between the original and this version. But still I like your composition here. I have tried a WS on this, but posted it to the original version. Hope you like it. TFS.

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  • alainh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4154 W: 144 N: 6743] (31876)
  • [2006-03-02 0:16]

salut Philippe,
le scan a à peine alteré l'mage, l'ambiance, les couleurs, les odeurs, tout y est.
une image autentique qui sent la vie.
je veux bien comprendre ce qu'elle peut signifier pour toi !
bonne journée Philippe
alain

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  • tabora Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1196 W: 297 N: 1565] (12616)
  • [2006-03-13 13:22]

Bonsoir Philippe,

Belle photo de vie,elle a beaucoup de dynamique avec ses personnages,et pleine de couleurs.
J'aime cette version on voit plus de détails
Amitiés Joseph

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