yellow and blue Photo

Photographer’s Note

I took this snaphot after in a morning session walk around the watervillage, I had just passed by the lady on the bridge and I shot on my back trying to get her.
When I saw the preview, only the yellow lines catched my eye..
I considered a crop and rotate before posting, but at the end I think that the steps in the foreground add some thing...

The Brunei watervillage is the biggest in the world and it is indeed a place full of joy.
300.00 people live there today and since than more than 1300 years ago ;-)

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imtiyaz (997) 2007-08-21 11:46

Hi Manuel,

From your shot, and your note,
I think your subject is diluted just because of not cropping and not rotating, whatever it be it gives a different look,
At a fast glance on gallery I am not able to see your original Object (Lady), Just because of this dominating lines :)

Anyway different presentation.

TFS,
Regards,
imtiyaz.m.s

basithry (466) 2008-04-09 3:45

Hello manuel sousa dias!
You've little bit succeeded here by capturing a woman.POV is incredible i must say.Colors are also lively & fresh.

But why i feel it's slightly tilted to the LEFT,(With respect to ladder)?

But rest is alright, i've posted a workshop, hope you'll like it.(Best of luck for future)
Regards.
Basit

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