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rgb in kampung ayer


rgb in kampung ayer
Photo Information
Copyright: Mark Panszky (markoci) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 95 N: 396] (3871)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-21
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: EOS Digital Rebel, Canon 28-135mm is, Digital RAW
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/25 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Asie, mes préférées, Kids from the World Part IV [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-03-26 5:43
Viewed: 1600
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Bandar Seri Begawan, capital of Brunei. Part of it is Kampung Ayer. Here, the village's centuries-old web of homes, markets, mosques, schools, medical clinics and police and fire stations hovers on stilts over the shallows of Brunei River. Even today, water taxis are the most efficient and popular means of negotiating the Kampung's labyrinthine waterways. From their prows, one could see the mosque's glistening minarets rising above multi-hued, garden-draped homes.

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  • Great 
  • semra Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 0] (133)
  • [2006-03-26 5:45]

hi mark
perfect color
well done

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2006-03-26 5:47]
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Super colors here. Very nice simplicyt that the large bloicks of color provide. I like the fact that theres a boy. Im a bit bothered by those couple of white pixels above his head. Perhaps cloning them out would be something to do. I dont know your stance on cloning out.

Joli couleur qui font ressortir la photo parmi toutes les autres
François

RGB was the good title Mark
what a strong color here
should be niec if the boy have a yellow tee shirt ;o)
heheh just kidding
good color picture
regards
••simon••

sorry greeb later

Very nice shot!! Good colors and composition :)

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  • itaca Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 26] (293)
  • [2006-03-26 8:02]

Hello Mark
The color is fantastic.
Excellent composition.
Good work! Congratulations

Beautiful warm colours, well composed photo,

Hi Mark. Great composition with so many rectangles and colors and of course the great framing of the boy in the doorway. Though, it could be sharper.

Narayan

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  • onmax Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 202 W: 46 N: 75] (827)
  • [2006-03-26 10:26]

Hola Mark, me gusta la combinacion de colores, las lineas geometricas la hacen muy artistica, felicitaciones.
saludos

ONMAX

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  • elBud Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 47 N: 161] (2185)
  • [2006-03-26 12:07]

Mark, muy buena fotografia, muy colorida, un poquito en movimiento pero muy buena, buena composicion, muy bien.

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  • coco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4190 W: 145 N: 4963] (23440)
  • [2006-03-26 13:37]

Hi Mark.
Very good composition with good contrasts between the doors and colours.
That kid adds a lot of interest to the picture.

Thanks for share.

Szia Mark,
Nagyon jo cimet adtal ennek a kepnek, es tenyleg nagyon illo, a fantasztikus szinek miatt. A kompozicio sem lehetne jobb, az egesz fotobol arad a design. A kisfiu jelenlete persze meg tobbet ad hozza, es a halvany interior reszlet is. Jo lenne szerintem, ha egesz picit elesebb lenne a fokusz a kisfiu arcan, de ez elenyeszo a kep pozitiv aspektusai mellett.
Szia! Meddig vagy Taipeiben?
sasa

Hi Mark,
Wonderful picture! Simple and very expressive. Colors are seizing. Great work. Bravo!

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  • talikf Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 38 N: 142] (1214)
  • [2006-03-27 16:24]

Cool idea and great expression of the boy. Composition is really good, you could probably use some sharpening, the focus in the boy might be a little two soft... Tali

Perfect colours and composition.

Great lines and blend of objects, textures and materials too. I see you have almost managed to align all the interior lines with the frame...the only one that doesn't align is not your problem, because its simply not straight anyway.

This I would say is verging on a perfect picture...well done

kaj

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  • Tatum (43)
  • [2006-04-03 3:57]

Hi markoci ,
Only one word... Cool color and composition.
I love it.

Woooooh what a lovely face, what great colors and lightness. Very nice capture

hi mark.. flawless framing, fantastic colors, and what an unusaual snap from brunei.
tfs

Un bien beau portrait, dans cet univers coloré. Bien vu !
Marie

Hi Mark,

Good Composition, even the address is fully included. Woulb be better if the boy was not looking at the camera.

I like this pix

alfred

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