I took this snaphot after in a morning session walk around the watervillage, I had just passed by the lady on the bridge and I shot on my back trying to get her.
When I saw the preview, only the yellow lines catched my eye..
I considered a crop and rotate before posting, but at the end I think that the steps in the foreground add some thing...
The Brunei watervillage is the biggest in the world and it is indeed a place full of joy.
300.00 people live there today and since than more than 1300 years ago ;-)
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imtiyaz (1005) 2007-08-21 11:46
From your shot, and your note,
I think your subject is diluted just because of not cropping and not rotating, whatever it be it gives a different look,
At a fast glance on gallery I am not able to see your original Object (Lady), Just because of this dominating lines :)
Anyway different presentation.
basithry (480) 2008-04-09 3:45
Hello manuel sousa dias!
You've little bit succeeded here by capturing a woman.POV is incredible i must say.Colors are also lively & fresh.
But why i feel it's slightly tilted to the LEFT,(With respect to ladder)?
But rest is alright, i've posted a workshop, hope you'll like it.(Best of luck for future)
- Copyright: manuel sousa dias (diasman) (433)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-07-25
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Casio QV-R40
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/320 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-08-21 11:30